All Quite Silly (letter)

Dearest Heart,1

I know my world existed before you walked into it, but never did I live it. I think I was born counting the seconds, minutes, hours, and years until I met you. It’s all quite silly, really.2

When I look at you, I am overwhelmed by my own desire. It takes me over and I forget everything and everyone but you. Only you. 3

I attempt to look towards the bluest sky, but turn away when I realize it can’t compare to your eyes. I can’t look into the darkness, or at a raven’s wing, without thinking of your hair. When you leave for work, I shatter into a million pieces, each piece representing a kiss, an embrace that I couldn’t give. You gather them and hold them to your heart. Hold me to your heart.4

My own heart skips when you smile, laugh! It’s as if I’m living a fairytale, and you are my prince, always were. In the quaintest way, I know we were made for one another. You know me: I’m quaint anyhow.5

In the evening, just as you’re falling asleep, I look at you. I don’t know if you’ll ever know it, if you’ll ever ask, but I love you. I’ve never said that to anyone, anything. I’ve whispered it to you thousands of times. I’ve thought it several times, when you wrap your arms around me, when you kiss me, when you say you love me.6

I love you, Dearest Heart; I’ve always loved you. I don’t care how silly that seems. 7

Sweet dreams,8

Your wife

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  • grampabob1946
    November 1
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    Simply Touching!!!

    A great write of true love.


  • seamus gold member
    October 25
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    Lucky Dude


  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    October 25

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    This is so beautiful and emotional I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of this and I thank you for entering this contest The feelings you expressed were amazing and heartfelt... wonderful job.

    Pixie


  • LadyCharmed
    October 25
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    Beautiful! It's so poetic. You found many ways of describing a single feeling.


    • Lady Eventide Greeters member
      October 25
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      Hello, LadyC. Thanks for the comment. I never thought love was hard to describe until I had to put it into letter form. Thanks again.

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