Joel's Secret

I wake in terror,1

Reliving the night a bullet meant for her was stopped by her mom's body2

I'm glad her mother is dead.

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  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    December 28, 2009

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    Ooh lovely.

    This screams of guilty pleasure. I ADORE that last sentence and would give you clappies just for that. It's so human.

    Finalist for sure.

    Thanks for entering Character PostSecrets and good luck.

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  • Len Kage
    November 30, 2009
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    Nice and epic little confession yo got there...
    The character seems a little dark.