I'm alone.1
Dad is alseep from a cold2
And Mom's at work3
It's raining, and I'm scared4
The wind sounds like wolves howling5
And there's creaking outside of my room.6
My door is cracked open, and I am stranding right infront of it7
It keeps opening, and I keep pushing it closed.8
At first, I thought it was the cat9
But I oepn the door and the cats are on the couch.10
I want to quarinate myself untill the rain stops.11
I think that I am paranoid12
But I can't be13
I was fine earlier.14
There's a murderer living accross the street from me15
And weeks ago16
Dad had found an unside down trash can underneath my window17
So, it was easy to look insde my room18
I becamse petrified and paranoid from that eversience.19
I felt more safer once I heard he never did it again.20
But then, a neighbor said he was looking through our trash.21
I wanted to kill him.22
I feel like the creaking in the house is him standing over me.23
Then, the toaster randomly popped.24
I turned around to see a big black shadow over me25
Holding a butcher knife26
I could scream for only a second before there was red before my eyes.27
I could see myself fall to the ground and the shadow just..28
left29
Laughing30
Feeling accomplised.31
The redness flooded around me, and all I could do was move my left hand.32
I touched the top of my head, and then I knew where he hit me.33
Then34
I blacked out.
Dad is alseep from a cold2
And Mom's at work3
It's raining, and I'm scared4
The wind sounds like wolves howling5
And there's creaking outside of my room.6
My door is cracked open, and I am stranding right infront of it7
It keeps opening, and I keep pushing it closed.8
At first, I thought it was the cat9
But I oepn the door and the cats are on the couch.10
I want to quarinate myself untill the rain stops.11
I think that I am paranoid12
But I can't be13
I was fine earlier.14
There's a murderer living accross the street from me15
And weeks ago16
Dad had found an unside down trash can underneath my window17
So, it was easy to look insde my room18
I becamse petrified and paranoid from that eversience.19
I felt more safer once I heard he never did it again.20
But then, a neighbor said he was looking through our trash.21
I wanted to kill him.22
I feel like the creaking in the house is him standing over me.23
Then, the toaster randomly popped.24
I turned around to see a big black shadow over me25
Holding a butcher knife26
I could scream for only a second before there was red before my eyes.27
I could see myself fall to the ground and the shadow just..28
left29
Laughing30
Feeling accomplised.31
The redness flooded around me, and all I could do was move my left hand.32
I touched the top of my head, and then I knew where he hit me.33
Then34
I blacked out.
Author notes
Really, I don't know why it turned out like this. ^^;
It was soupposed to end with the guy standing infront of me, and then I black out. But, no, I wrote the rest...
I really dislike this. ANd I have noclue if it is a freakin poem story, whatever..
Uhm...
Comments
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AWESOME!!!
I think it's more of a story-like poem. It's really good. That was so awesome!! I loved it.

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I really don't know how this death came into my head xD
Too much death music videos I guessies..
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