Poem? Story? Idk

I'm alone.1

Dad is alseep from a cold2

And Mom's at work3

It's raining, and I'm scared4

The wind sounds like wolves howling5

And there's creaking outside of my room.6

My door is cracked open, and I am stranding right infront of it7

It keeps opening, and I keep pushing it closed.8

At first, I thought it was the cat9

But I oepn the door and the cats are on the couch.10

I want to quarinate myself untill the rain stops.11

I think that I am paranoid12

But I can't be13

I was fine earlier.14

There's a murderer living accross the street from me15

And weeks ago16

Dad had found an unside down trash can underneath my window17

So, it was easy to look insde my room18

I becamse petrified and paranoid from that eversience.19

I felt more safer once I heard he never did it again.20

But then, a neighbor said he was looking through our trash.21

I wanted to kill him.22

I feel like the creaking in the house is him standing over me.23

Then, the toaster randomly popped.24

I turned around to see a big black shadow over me25

Holding a butcher knife26

I could scream for only a second before there was red before my eyes.27

I could see myself fall to the ground and the shadow just..28

left29

Laughing30

Feeling accomplised.31

The redness flooded around me, and all I could do was move my left hand.32

I touched the top of my head, and then I knew where he hit me.33

Then34

I blacked out.

Author notes

Really, I don't know why it turned out like this. ^^;
It was soupposed to end with the guy standing infront of me, and then I black out. But, no, I wrote the rest...
I really dislike this. ANd I have noclue if it is a freakin poem story, whatever..

Uhm...

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  • AWESOME!!!

    I think it's more of a story-like poem. It's really good. That was so awesome!! I loved it.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


    • Rukia Kuchiki
      October 25
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      I really don't know how this death came into my head xD
      Too much death music videos I guessies..