LOVE GAME:1
CH. 2: HOT 'N' COLD:2
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SAPHIRE'S POV:5
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I sat down on my bed crying, but when Odd came into my room, I quickly wiped away my tears. "What do you want?" I asked him. "Your granny said I could read my mail on your laptop." Odd said. "Fine. But when I get back from my shower, you better be gone." When I came back from my shower, wearing a pink bathrobe, I saw Odd was still here. He was playing a game on the laptop. When I said, "You're still here?" He paused his game and looked at me. I don't know why, but when he saw me, his eyes widened. He unpaused his game and said, "Granny told me to stay for dinner." 8
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So, I sat down on my bed with a hairbrush. As soon as I sat down on my bed, Odd came over and laid down on my bed. I was about to get up and sit somewhere else, when Odd pulled my arm back. "What?!" I asked annoyed, while inside me, my heart was melting with his touch. "It's not responding." He said, letting go of my arm. While I was trying to fix the laptop, I thought I heard Odd say, "Man, she looks hot when she's wet." But I must've misheard, because when I said, "What?" he said, "Nothing."10
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After I fixed the laptop, I went into the bathroom with my clothes and changed into them. When I came back inside, Odd was sitting up. I sat back down on the bed and Odd handed me the laptop and I asked, "Don't you need it anymore?" "Nope. I'm bored." He said. So, I took the laptop from him and put it on my lap. After a while, I felt Odd touching my hair. I started to feel really sleepy, but I restrained myself. "What are you doing?" I asked trying to sound annoyed. "Nothing. Just touchin' your hair." Odd replied casually. "Why?" I asked. "Just wanted to. It's really soft." Odd commented. "Thanks." I said. 12
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Odd sniffed my hair a little. "It smells nice too." "It's strawberry." I told him. "It smells more like honey." Odd said. "That's because you're not sniffing my hair, you're sniffing my neck." I replied. As I said that, Odd pulled his head back, embarrassed. "Relax, I'm just kidding." I replied with a giggle. I noticed Odd was staring at me. "What?" I asked him. "Nothing." He replied. "Whatever. I better go make dinner." When I went into the kitchen, I noticed Sissi wasn't here. "Where's Sissi?" I asked granny. "She's sleeping over at a friend's house tonight." she told me. 14
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So, I made dinner for granny and Odd and after they finished eating, I sat down at the table and started to eat, but granny told me to clean up first. So, I obeyed, I finally got to eat at 11:00. After Odd left I collasped onto my bed and started writing in my diary about my day.
Author notes
I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT 2 CALL THE 2ND CH. SO I JUST MADE SOMETHIN' UP. BUT THE TITLE LOOKS REALLY LOOKS REALLY GOOD WITH THE BACKGROUND!!!!!!!!!
BTW: I LOVE IT WHEN MY HAIR GETS IN MY FACE!!!!! MY HAIR'S LIKE REALLY SOFT!!!!!!!!!!!
MY COMPUTER SOMETIMES NOT RESPONDS- LIKE A COUPLE MINUTES AGO IT DID & ALL MY WORK GOT ERASED, SO I HAD 2 START ALL OVER!!!!!!!!
ANYWAY, I DON'T KNOW IF THAT HAPPENES ON LAPTOPS 2 THOUGH!!!!!!!!!
ALSO, WHEN SOME1 TOUCHES MY HAIR, I FEEL REALLY SLEEPY. BUT, I DON'T GET THAT SLEEPY WHEN I TOUCH IT, PROBABLY BECAUSE I'M USED 2 TOUCHING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
In a list
DOES ODD LIKE SAPHIRE 2?
Comments
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lol, is this based from Lady Gaga's song? Very good!
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Odd pulled his head back, embarressed. (Should be embarrassed xD)
A few other mistakes, but seeing how light headed I'm feeling right now I can't try and fix them. I guess the name fits the chapter a bit, and yes Laptops can not respond to, mine does it often. How can you get sleepy when someone touches your hair
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Oh, and... Every character should have there own paragraph when they are talking xDbeginning: 3, language: 3, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 3.


