My Vow

Autumn Bridal Picture 1

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Shall I make you this vow,3

Of honesty, friendship and love,4

That comes from my heart, now?5

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The simple honesty we share,7

Keeps our relationship strong; 8

A strength in which no other can compare.9

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You began as a friend unlike any other,11

We talked, shared, feelings got deeper.12

You became my confidant and lover.13

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My love for you is deep and wide,15

Deeper then the deepest and wider then the widest;16

In my heart and mind that love shall always reside.17

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These are the things I've felt so strong,19

The honesty, friendship and love,20

In which we both belong.21

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Now tis the vow I make to you,23

Of honesty, friendship and love;24

To give our love and life continue.25

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I promise to thee,27

From my mind, heart and soul,28

In all things to speak honestly.29

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I commit to you,31

A friendship unending,32

Together all things we shall get through.33

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I pledge to thee,35

A love that only grows,36

To surpass the greatest love in history.37

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Now these are my vows,39

Words of promise from the heart,40

Started small, larger we are and our love shall always grow.41

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Author notes

Terry, i love You so very much. *reaches out to caress Your cheek*

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  • rinzu
    October 29

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    i loved it...seriously...had written my wedding vows in the form of a poem too...

    that was deep passionate and sincere...

    good luck


  • DewDrop
    October 27
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    This was so passionate. I loved it! Great job!

    Dew


  • Shadow06
    October 25
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    You're the most passionate couple ever!


  • TNTrouble
    October 25

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    *closes eyes as the tears fall and I know not what to say*


    • MsAlee gold member
      October 25
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      *leans up to kiss the tears away and whispers against Your cheek* Love You don't have to say anything at all.

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