Omar was running. It was January 15, 2002. He had just killed a new girl named Jenny. He had been taking drugs like his frinds had been and didn'd know what had been wrong with him ever since. He liked Jenny and was scared. What would he do? he went to the police station. " There's a girl behind the highschool thats dead!" he said pretending that he had seen her. The police examined. There was no evidence. Omar was glad to here that as he ran home. He stashed the knife that he had killed her with in his secret hidout. He put it under a peice of wood underground that was loose. He went to his room and fell flatfaced on his bed. He was so stupid to kill her!!! She was in his head all day. He decided to forget about her and act like she never came to the school. He was fine as the weeks went by. He got a new girlfriend. She was a new kid. He had told her about Mr. Polester and not to get him mad or he would blow up. His girlfriend giggled. Then he froze. That was what he told Jenny. Jenny giggled like that too. He got up and was excused the bathroom. He washed his hands and put his hands on his head closing his eyes. He tried to forget but he couldnt. He opened his eyes. He looked in the miror.......she was there. Right behind him saying: "You killed me when I liked you. You will get it. Dont worry....... you will get it." Omar ran out of the bathroom and toward the door. She was blocking the door. He ran into Mr. POlester's room. It was empty. She was there. The door locked. He ran to the door and he couldnt open it. She walked slowly to him with a knife........SLICE!1
By Jacalyn Walsh.2
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I remember this.
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wow wow wow! amazing, there should be a movie to this. this was awesome! it's really short though but i liked it! you should write more like this!
your sis,
vanessa ( I luv ya girl!) -
Wow, that was quick. Is he dilusional? Paragraphs, my friend, you need paragraphs. No more to this story? A great job for someone your age, as well.
trust in ravens

