As the trio got closer to the ancient city, Sophia began to feel uneasy once more. It was as though the ancients spirits knew she was seeking out Sephiroth, or maybe they sensed the jenova inside her. However, knowing what she had to do, Sophia carried on. As she turned around, she saw the ancient girl heading towards an alter. The alter was surrounded by water, and had a feeling of tranquil to it. Sophia positioned herself out of sight, above the altar, alongside the clone, who was ready to strike if all did not go so well.1
Both knew Cloud would turn up. The clone had wanted to get it out of the way before he came, but Sophia had different plans. She knew that Cloud treasured the girl, and therefore planned on killing the girl and hurting Cloud so much he would never be able to forgive himself, and Sophia knew exactly how she was going to do it, but all she could do was wait.2
Sure enough, in the midle of the night, after what seemed like forever, Sophias wait was over. Cloud and two of his friends turned up at the altar. The clone had been bugging Sophia, telling her just to kill the girl and have it done with, but Sophia wanted to make Cloud suffer, and plus, where was the fun in just killing the girl? Sophia positioned herself just above Cloud and stared down upon him, and surely enough he headed towards the girl, his blue eyes now stern. Sophia watched as he then raised his sword towards the girl, the, just as he was about to strike her, Vincent shouted "STOP!!!". This surprised Sophia and made her loose concentration. She then turned to look at the clone and said to him3
"Ok you can kill her now. It will hurt him more if you do it."4
The clone then nodded, and he drew his masamune sword. He positioned himself right above the girl, who seemed to be praying for something. With his sword pointing directly towards the girl, he then jumped, travelling down at quite a speed before landing on the ground, his sword now impaled on the girl. He looked Cloud directly in the eye, and removed his sword, slowly, smiling, as the girl slumped to the floor lifeless.5
Author notes
So what will happen next??? I thought that this would be a good place to end it. Will the real sephiroth appear in the next chapter??? Will Sophia confront Cloud before leaving for the northern crater?? Find out next time on revenge of Sophia
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Thankkyou 
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WONDERFUL STORY
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Awww thanks . I'd say i'm most of the way through this story now (well for ff7)There will be more afterwards as im going to bring her into Advent Children too. Thanks for commenting and im glad you like it
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wow, the way you write you should make up your own final fantasy, this is a great chapter here. i mean it is not one of my favorite chapters, but that doesn't lessen it one bit, it is a good read, i honestly can't wait to she what happens next, like i said it inspied me to make up my own. i'll tell you when i am done with it. the first chapter should be done by next week. but this isn't about me, this is about you great story which i can't wait to see more of, keep up the good work.
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lol yeah its one of my favourite parts too
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Aww thanks , but im working on becoming a scientist. Maybe someday I will
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This.. is my favourite part in the game.
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beutifuly writen
another great story sophia, you should becaome a book writer i would buy ur book if you did.
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