"Mom! Get up! I'm going to be late!" Jenny practicly screamed out. "5 more minutes. Im too tired!" said jane,jenny's mother. " Mom, this is the first day of school! I cant be late!" cried Jenny. Jane got up and put her robe on and told Jenny to get dressed and get ready for school. Jane went to the kitchen and was drinkin a cup of coffee. Jenny rushed down the stairs and said, "Mom! Come on!" Jane went into the car and was driving Jenny to school. 'Oh, the first day of school will be great!'Jenny thought. Jane pulled up in the front of the highschool. She took a sip of coffee and said, "Have a great day sweety." Jane sounded very tired. Jenny thought she was up drinking all night again. She went into the school as the kids starred. She felt scared as goose-bumps shrivled down her back. She felt as she just got hit by a truck. She went to her first class, socail studies. "Class, you have a new student. Her name is.... Whats your name?" he asked Jenny. " Jenny." said Jennie witha shreik. " Her name is Jenny. Now, tell a little about yourself, Jenny." he said. Jenny froze. She felt as her lips froze together. 'This day will be awful!' she thought. "Jenny? Are you alright?" asked the teacher. "Yes." said Jenny with her voice squeely. " My name is Jenny and i transfered from desmoins, Iowa." said Jenny releived that she said something. " You will sit over there next to Omar. The boy with the black hair." said the teacher. The boy was kind of cute with black hair all pulled back. Jenny sat down hoping nobody would say anything that would imbearis her. " Hi im Omar. Thats Mr. Polester. Hes a good teacha but-cha better not get him angry. He might explode." said Omar. Jenny giggled at what he had said. "Ms. Jenny, please be quiet while i am teaching the class. You can go and start giggling at Omar *AfTeR* class!" Said Mr. Polester. The class giggled. Jenny felt imbearist. She shouldn't imbearis herself as she did at her old school. She almost was a dork in her classroom then. The bell rang. It was time for PE. Omar was in her PE classes too. She was so releived. She liked Omar. But She wasnt sure if she liked him too much yet.At PE she played basket ball and her team won. Omar was on her team. The bell rang. She went through all of her classes and made some new friends. Kassie, Mary, and Shane. She couldnt forget Omar though.Omar gave her a note. It said: Jenny, Please meet me after school in the alley behind the school. I need to talk to you. Omar 1
Omar had very good handwriting too. She was so excited to see him. She couldn't wait. After school, she went to the alley behind the school. "What did you want to see me for, Omar?" asked Jenny? "Well I wanted to give you somethin'. Somethin' specail," said Omar. "Wha-what is it that you wanted to give me?" asked Jenny. Jenny thought he sounded scary. 'What's with him?' she thought. Omar said "Im going to give you..........*THIS*!" omar stuck a pocket knife through her heart. She died on January 15, 2002. She haunts him telling him these words " You killed me when I liked you. You will get it, Omar. Dont worry. You will get it!!!"2
The End By: Jacalyn Walsh ( There *will* be part two. Dont worry!!)3
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Awesome! MORE!
this was excellent! for now on you're my little sister, lol. you're cool for someone your age. okay now i'm off to read part two! YAY!' i remember when i was in 6th grade, i liked this boy named omar..he was soooo cute..i miss him! well anyways this time i'm really off to read part two! lol. c ya.
your sis,
~vanessa~
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yea i really like it but it did seem like it was rushed but very nice cant wait for part two
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Good plot, very interesting, though a bit rushed. spelling--embarass. Off to read more!
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