My Story's Plot

Joey Child, the boy everyone hated in High School. Remember that kid whom always did EVERYTHING right. The all-American boy, the smart one. The best in everything he ever did. But that is not all, he knows he is the best and believe me when I say, he will never let anyone forget it. 1

Well, now he is at Yale. Doing college things. Trying, once and for all, to breakaway a little bit from his parents' rules. Then he meets Kiley, by chance you see. His life will never be the same.2

The catch is- he hates her with a passion like no other.3

Kiley Aiken, the artist, the token 'poor girl' at he high school. A bit of a rebel, whom is trying to break away from the life she has known. Her best friend wants her to stay around, but Kiley is now at Yale (on a free ride, no way was her mother paying for that). 4

Then she meets Joey. And decides- she is a complete idiot not worthy of her time. Besides, right now, she is married to her music.5

Flash forward, 10 years. Joey is in rehab and Kiley is in LA. Both are fighting their own problems, while others are more visible than others.6

Both are having dreams of each other, but have no memory of that person. Weird, right?7

When they become transported to another place, what will happen?8

Only them seeing what their life should have been. All they had to do was see what was right in front of them all along. They will soon realize that everything could have been different (not bad different either). They could have had a great life, had they chosen each other.9

Now the question becomes- with that knowledge, which path will they choose?10

Love or their current life? (Might seem like the right choice is sitting right there, but alas- what if love meant giving up your dream?)11

Author notes

Written for short story class. Yes I know I left a couple of questions, but the answers should be right in front of you face.

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  • Munda
    November 9, 2005
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    Even though you left a couple of questions, it got me interested enough to want to read the complete story.


  • Broken Dreamz
    November 4, 2005
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    love....