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I think the title "He was cool" fits the story because of the way Billie interacts with the attitude obsessed boy. I also thinks it works because it seems that she might fall for him later in the story. So thats what I think

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  • eirini
    October 23

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    Thanks for entering:)

    well you're right about the fact that she falls for him, but there's someone before that and in the middle. And the romance is sorta like a subplot i guess. Cool anyway