Separation

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You looked at me sideways~ like you could read my soul on my skin...2

You wanted more - a smile, just acknowledgement, 3

but I misread you again and again.4

It's an odd sensation, this quiet craving...5

Insatiable; we're never satisfied.6

But... there's no "we." 7

It's just you, and I.8

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Better then my poems, at least. X__X.

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  • November 4, 2005
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    This has a poem-like feel to it. I wouldn't say its better than your poems, but it's certaintly not worse. My dear Merce, every word you write is always full of meaning.