TUBE: My New Story IDEA

(I hope this gets your inspiration flowing, but please do not copy my characters or ideas as I plan on turning this into a book series.)1

Working Title: TUBE2

PROLOGUE:3

They had been planning the conference for over three month. Sheila and her mother, Charlotte, were to lead the first annual international conference on the possible near-death of the sun. Only this time it was more than just a meeting on the effects of this luminous red mass of energy on the way to its torturous end.4

They were facing the near end of human life altogether, Extinction. For there had been wide-spread documentation leading to evidence of a much greater shift then the global dimming caused by a dying sun. Something had crashed right into the sun.5

Charlotte had the taxi waiting outside their apartment complex in Boston. Charlotte was more nervous than her daughter, she kept dabbing her lips and re-applying her glossy lipstick, her hair was tied back in a bun and her eyes shown bright against the rest of her face—which was masked by tan foundation. Sheila was ready in her black dress pants and white button down shirt. Her anticipation had been building up to this night. It would be a chance to demonstrate her ability to convey science to her mother and the rest of the world.6

Sheila had kept her son, Daniel, over at her friend’s house for the day and night of the conference. Daniel, her baby son who could barely walk or talk, had cried all morning until Ericka had put him into the comfortable crib with his happy stuffed cartoon animals.7

It had been nearly five pm (they were running short on time) when the cab pulled out of the lot. Charlotte took the rear of the cab with all of her paperwork to carry, and to save space Sheila sat up front. It was an hour’s worth of driving before they made it to the conference hall in a room of what had looked like a large institution of some sort.8

The mother and daughter were just about to close the cab doors when suddenly Charlotte got a phone call. Charlotte held the cell close to her ear as an expression of terror overcame her face. Sheila looked at her mom and asked her what was wrong. Charlotte said, “Oh dear. You’re going to have to take the cab back. I can’t miss this conference.”9

“What is happened mom?” Sheila asked her mother in a frantic voice.10

“Ericka says that your Daniel has gone missing.”11

"WHAT?" Sheila cried out, "What do you mean he has gone missing?"12

It was as if all the frustrations and expectations of the conference had evaporated into thin air. Sheila climbed into the back of the cab without a sideways glance and told the driver to hurry up and take her back home. The cab sped out of there in no time. 13

It took her a few hurried glances to realize that the cab driver was dressed up—in a police uniform. Sheila wondered if her mom had been assigned this cab for transportation to the conference. It wasn’t really like a regular cab- for instance it was completely black, not white or yellow. It didn’t even have the word taxi written on it. 14

Sheila had no time to waste. “Officer, my son may be in danger. Will you help me find him? Please?”15

“Now please calm down miss. If you don’t find your son within the next few hours you should call the police and they’ll be on it.”16

“What if it’s too late?”17

PLOTLINES: Daniel was kidnapped and taken to a place known as 'THE BASE' where military scientists experiment on babies and children in order to turn them into engineers of the future.18

CHARACTERS: 19

Charlotte—age 43, mother of main character and widely recognized in community for role in international affairs20

Sheila: Main character, female, 21, protagonist, public speaker, with some cop experience21

Son of Sheila: Daniel, Toddler, 3 years old, was kidnapped22

Taxi Driver: race-black, undercover FBI agent, Jeffrey, age 2823

Research Scientist: 'top secret' experimenter, William, age 5424

Ajay: antagonist turned protagonist, graduated from the ‘Base’ and has unlimited knowledge on their secrets (possible friend or lover) romance could evolve25

Lisa: genetically altered with alien DNA and a hostile super-human26

Joe: young boy about 13 who has a special gift at figuring things out27

Lindsey: on board of planetary exploration, head of research project, meets with Sheila later and sets up the Expedition28

DETAILS:29

It is pretty far into the future on planet earth30

The Sun is dying and wreaking havoc on the globe31

the balance between light and dark is lessening.32

Purpose of The Base: human engineers, to save the world33

'To save the Sun from expiring'34

Top Secret: alien DNA found on Jupiter's Moon35

Moon: Lisa’s Alias and secret dna origin36

Starts when Daniel Goes Missing37

Cop knows Daniel has been kidnapped to Base38

They go underground39

They find out about ‘Lisa’40

Who was once kidnapped as a teen41

Settings: City of Boston, The Secret Base, and Outer-Space42

More Details:43

William says that he won't allow the world to be engulfed in darkness, is also religious and Christian--finds a common element to unite them and settle their differences before a war breaks out44

Sheila figures out how to save the world from disaster45

Daniel is rescued and unharmed46

Lisa is 'Set Free' and taken home to her own planet (but not to die) this remains more of a mystery47

Charlotte is arrested on conspiracy to kidnap her daughter's son48

Daniel later works for CERN49

Author notes

This is just a basic outline.

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  • Color Splash
    October 23

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    I'm getting lots of sci-fi. Interesting. Let's see how this game plays out...

    Good luck!


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