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If you thought you could get away with it, you were dead wrong.

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  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    November 13
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    Ooh, awesome hook!!!! I am a sucker for this sort of stories and there are so many ways one could go from here!!! I'd love to read more so tell me if you continue! Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Anti Creative
    October 22

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    If you thought you could hook me in with your lack of description, you were wrong But if you think you should keep writing, you're alive right.