The Heartbreaker (Chapter 3)

The next day I walked back into school with my brothers, my ipod blasting through my head phones. Listening to my fave song: "Break your little heart" by All Time Low. Looking around to see that loser new girl, I knew she thought I was serious last night because when she saw me staring, she blushed. I chuckled a little and walked over to her. Pausing my song and smiled at her.1

"I never got your name." I whispered to her. Biting her lip and stop what she was doing and looked at me.2

"My name is Rayna." She whispered and her blush went even deeper. 3

"Well I'm Jack. And I have one more question for you." I whispered again.4

"Yes?" She breathed.5

"Will you go out with me?" I asked and her eyes lit up.6

"I'd love too!" She declared, smiling like all those girls I've now broken.7

"Good. Let's break up." I laughed, her eyes went dark. Her lip trembling in anger. She knew I won.8

"YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE!" She screamed. I just laughed and walked away. Broke her little heart that easily. Then that's when I saw her, another new girl. But this one was more, pretty. Somebody to break again?9

I walked up to her and gave her my best smile. "Hey, you new here? I can show you around." I flirted but she gave me a look up and down and shook her head.10

"I don't go for bad boy scum like you. I go for good guys." She snapped and walked away. My heart beated faster. I wanted her, for myself.11

Rayna came over to me and snarled. I rolled my eyes. "Who is that new girl?" I whispered and she smirked.12

"She's my sister..." She answered and my jaw flew open. I can't believe I am saying this (even if it's in my mind) but she won the game...For now...13

Author notes

Chapter 3 of my novel The Heartbreaker

This chapter he broke Rayna's heart but then her sister made a quick turn and stole his. Will she break his heart or thrive with it forever?

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  • just-little-me
    October 23
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    woah


  • Britt-knee
    October 21

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    I really like this story. I wish he didn't purposely try to break girls hearts. But that's one of the things that makes it a god story. So please continue and fast.


  • cutsherself
    October 21
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    JACK!! CAN GO SUCK IT!! HAHA
    AND HE GOT OWNED


  • PurpleScene.
    October 21
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    PWND! lol
    This Jack is a total douche.