The Heartbreaker (Chapter 2)

I was standing outside the school, leaning on a tree, smoking a cigarette. The air cold enough where my skin felt like falling off, enough for snow to start to fall from the sky. Breathing in and out of sharp angry breaths. how could that little emo chick just think she can make ME look like a fool in front of MY school? My teeth gritting, cursing over and over under my breath. I'll show her, I'll make her pay. An evil smile spread across my lips. I knew exactly what I was going to do. I'm gonna break her little heart.1

A small tap on my shoulder made me come back to reality. She stood there and I grunted. She just rolled her eyes. "Don't tell me your still mad? Man up and stop being a sore loser." She snickered.2

That's when I made my first move. "That's not it. Your a girl. I mean I never been a loser before...but I guess now that I think about it, I'm glad your the one who beat me." I whispered, giving her one of those smiles that any girl could fall for. She glared. 3

"What do you by I'm a girl? Duh, girls can whoop ass, unlike you sore losers called guys! I came out here to say sorry but whatever! I almost felt sorry for you but forget! You men are all the same!" She yelled and her hand went up to slap me. Just what I wanted her to do. Grabbing her by that same hand, pulling her so close to me that her warm breath brushed on my cold lips.4

Finally, while she was about to gasp, I leaned in and kissed her. Wrapping her arms around her body and slowly she wrapped hers around mine. A light blush crossed her face and I closed my eyes. Till I pulled away. "I meant it in a good way." I whispered and walked away. She was smiling at first then she shook her head.5

"Don't you dare do that again! You pervert!" She yelled at me and I turned and smirked. 6

"You know yo liked it. You kissed back." I laughed a little and opened my car door, started the car and drove away. Leaving her standing there with her jaw hanging open and knew she lost this round. But we both knew tomorrow is another day...

Author notes

Chapter 2 of my novel called "The Heartbreaker"!!!!
And yes that picture is of them kissing!!
The last picture in the first chapter is of her and her twin brother that is coming up in the next chapter! promise!

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  • zombeeeeee
    October 27
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    awesome

    he sounds like a man i could fall for

    beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 5.


  • Stellaqt2
    October 25
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    I DON'T C A PICTURE, BUT ANYWAY I REALLY LIKED TJIS CH.!!!!!!!!!

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 3.

  • just-little-me
    October 23
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    omigosh i love this chapter


  • PurpleScene.
    October 21
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    Haha that was awesome!!


  • IceCrystal7
    October 21
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    he is so sneaky! More please!!


  • cutsherself
    October 20
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    I LOVE THIS

    • Thanks!

      Thanks for taking the time to comment!!!! ^w^
      I'll write the third chapter now because you inspired me too!!!
      But one question:
      Who should win the next round? The girl? Or Jack?

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