my story

Well here's my story then ill do a poem**1

One day me and my bf were eating together at the courtyard well I was scene and some preppy cheerleader didn't like .. No wait scratch that she hated emo/scene people so she was mad that I got a bf and everything so she came up to him sat on his lap and made out with him -infront of me- and they kept on making out so I left ran and cried then I thought about bieng emo because I was already scene and I go thru so much emotional pain that it would be less painful then I cut myself and it didn't hurt***2

I had so much pain3

So I cut my vien4

I hated my life5

Because it had so much fights6

No one cared what I did7

so I ran and hid 8

I hate my life because all the pain9

But this year it got better 10

Honestly my lifes been a lot better this past year

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  • Mistress Cheetah
    October 21

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    Ohh. That's really really sad... Anyhow, It's an awesome story! Too bad... It's really good and you should try putting it in more of a story words. More flow... I don't know, maybe explain the screeching anger inside you ^^


  • cutsherself
    October 19
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    wow tht almost happened to me