Motivation: return to the City of God.2
Goal: to help the misguided seventeen-year-old Nathan Crestler (known by the angels as "Eden") find his true purpose as a member of the Elect.3
Conflict: she is trapped in a world full of sin and impertinence and is constantly being pushed beyond her limits by an ignorant Eden.4
Epiphany: When she realizes that she has fallen in love with the dangerous mortal she is trying to save, she discovers that beauty can be found in even the most wretched, sinful places and comes to the realization that love transcends rationality, purpose--even life itself.5
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Author notes
I don't know what NANO is, but this looked like fun 
Neveah is from "Eden's Angel," a novel I just started. She is a guardian angel trying to redirect the life of an Elect (if you're not Calvinist, the Elect are mortals predestined from birth to ascend to heaven). I'm an atheist--not Calvinist by any means--but the idea sounded really cool to me, so I began the story. The first chapter is up on storywrite, but I don't know how I'm going to get where I want it to go--if that made any sense at all... 
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A contest entry
- Snow-Flaking Nano by Prodigious.Mirth.
300 points, ended October 22, 5 entries
• next story in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
