Revenge of Sophia (part 8)

The Three of them watch as Cloud picks up the materia. Sophia jumps down upon them and says 1

"You know, if you give me that your life will be so much easier,"2

"Why would I want to give it to you?" Cloud asked3

"Well put it this way, its your funeral if you don't. You give me the black materia and you will not get hurt. However if you refuse, I'll just have to get it another way," Sophia said, stern look in her emerald eyes, staring directly into Clouds blue eyes.4

"I refuse," Cloud replied, and reached for his sword, but before he knew it, Sophia had drawn her masamune blade and swung it directly towards his throat. Cloud quickly jumped back and a sword fight broke out between them. Sophia was quick on her sword, but she was also sly and unpredictable. She swung her sword again, aiming for Clouds chest, only to see it meet with his large buster sword once more. Cloud swung his sword at her waist, but Sophia jumped into the air, somersalted and landed back on her feet. After a few clangs of swords later, she heard the clone telling her to back off,  and to help him retrieve the black mateira his way. She then looked at Cloud and said to him5

"We will finish this later," before disappearing into the trees around her.6

As the clone appeared, Cloud loked a little scared, Sophia, after making herself invisible, came into the area also. The clone asked Cloud for the black materia. Sophia again focused her eye directly onto Cloud, feeling him trying to resist, she continued to stare as Cloud edged towards the clone and handed him the black materia. Knowing her job was done, she smiled, but decided to have a little more fun. She then forced Cloud to begin to hit the ancient girl with him, the she followed after the clone and Sadie.7

Later on, She also appeared, along with Sephiroth, in one of Clouds dreams, telling him that the ancient girl would die if she interfered with their plans. She then headed for the city of the ancients, Ajit, alongside the clone and Sadie.8

Author notes

Sophia now is heading up to the ancient city. She hates the ancients. Will she kill the ancient girl?? or will she watch as the girl gets killed. Maybe it was just a dream. Find out in the next part of Revenge of Sophia.

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  • 1-Winged-Angel
    November 2, 2005
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    lol a love hate thing huh, lol. I'm glad that I have inspired you , and I hope you enjoy the rest of the series. If you do write a series, let me know nd I will cheeck it out


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 2, 2005
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    Nice, but i can't wait to see what happens next, i kind of never seen that side of cloud, he is my second favorite character in the series. I have kind of a love hate think going for sophia. it keeps me interested in the story. the more i read the more intruged i am and inspired to write my own fantasy. not of this series but my own. that's for the inspiration, Angel you have just become a muse to a fellow writer. Thanks, keep up the inspiring work.

  • 1-Winged-Angel
    November 1, 2005
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    Thankyou


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 1, 2005
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    TRULY WONDERFUL!

    Yet another wonderful chapter in the story; wonderful write!

  • 1-Winged-Angel
    November 1, 2005
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    Thanks . I'm glad you like it .

  • Dragons Fire
    November 1, 2005
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    wow i could see the battle in my head, you are a really good writer, cant wait till the next story,

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