As for you my friend (p 5)

As Eku and Claic arrived and Rairi's lovely home, the door already open as maids and butlers rushed by. 1

"mmm Well Rairi sure has become well more than common wealth". Eku said looking at the black and turqoise colored marble floor.2

Claic nodded.3

"Ah the love birds have arrived", Sarafeena said comming down the stairs.4

"Nice to meet agian," Eku said.5

"Aqua, take them to the honeymoon loft" Sarafeena ordered a maid.6

Gazing up the stairs Eku and Claic looked at eachother. The stairs didnt even give the two a sweat.7

"how long have you been working for Rairi and Sarafeena?" claic asked.8

"Not long, aye sir, and madame this is your room" She said opening the door,"You're evening attires have been placed in the closet."9

"One more thing" Eku said turning around.10

"Who all has arrived?" Claic finished.11

"Everyone now." The maid turned and slid out the door.12

"Well are you ready to tell everyone the news?" Eku asked.13

"Sure am my love" Claic kissed Eku's hand softly.14

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  • BlackedAshes
    November 15, 2005
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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHH the word slid how dare you use htat word again lol like beof rj/p lol well waht a lovelry home it is today lol gah I cant waite to read the next one here oina few secs............sorry for all the typo's lol


    ----------------------Love always

    Kyeneamo Itchitisio


    • Zaviarah
      December 9, 2009
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      i would never do that

      • Zaviarah
        December 9, 2009
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        sorry. my computers messed up. this was a comment to a different story


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    November 1, 2005
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    I just love ordering maids, though their service is slightly different for me. another fun read, keep up the great writing.