The Man He Killed

Standing in the ancient inn, I caught a glimpse of him. Walking forwards, his head snapped in my direction. I snapped out a gun. 1

"You won't get away this day," I say. The inn freezes in silence, and everyone rushes into a chair. My rival pulls out his gun. The unmistakable noise of gunfire fills the ancient inn. We fire at the exact same time, but I fire a second. I easily dodge the bullet from my opponent and watch as the blood gushes from his heart. I dive into the area of his bloody death and I feast on his blood & body. 2

I am a bloodthirsty monster coming to get you. My thirst for blood will never stop. You look a good target. Here I come...

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  • Kari gold member
    November 4
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    Fantastic job! Short & Scary.


  • MidnightEclipse gold member
    October 20

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    Are you sure you're only nine? Jk. No but seriously, this was awesome, especially for someone your age. I didn't think it was too bloody, but that's really for the author to call. Great job!