Dead Party

In a small dorm room at Branford Hall sat three girls, apparently roommates. Their names? Kaitlin, Amanda and Jemma. They sat around in their PJ’s talking about boys, food and all the normal girl things. The girls loved to gossip…except for Amanda, she was never a big fan of talking about others. So, they talked about past relationships.1

“Yea…he may as well have become a victim to a murder or something…I dunno, I haven’t seen him in years!” Kaitlin giggled.2

“I guess…I mean, I haven’t seen Jake in 7 months…last I heard he wasn’t doin all that good for himself.” Jemma replied.3

“OH MY GOSH! Did you hear what happened to that friend of Amanda’s friend?!”4

“NOOOOOoooo…Amanda?”5

“Well…I dunno if it’s such a great story…it being the anniversary of that very night…”6

“It’s FIIINE!” Kaitlin whined, “Just tell us…”7

“Well…like Kait said…it was my friend’s friend…she and her brother were alone for the weekend, her parents gone to Las Vegas or some sort of place like that. And so…she planned a party for that Saturday with her brother backing her up a hundred and ten percent. Their parents set off Friday morning and by that night the house was in place for the party. Well…”8

“Lemme guess…the party never happened!” Jemma sneered.9

“Actually it did…”10

“Come off it! This sounds like I load of bull!” They both laughed ignorantly at Amanda.11

"I'm serious you guys!  This is how it happened." Amanda looked worried, “The party went off without a hitch. Many people ended up sleeping over. And in the morning…all but the girl was left alive…and she had a bloody hunting knife in her blood covered hand. She ended up at CVH, wanting to die from the loss of so many people and seeing all those dead bodies in front of her…the funny thing is that they don’t know if she is the actual one who killed all those people because they found the words, “NEVER FOUND” on the mirror of the bathroom.”12

“Woah…freaky…” Kait was completely speechless.13

Author notes

My subject: My own made up Urban Legend.
My line: "I'm serious you guys!  This is how it happened."

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  • NotMyShadeOfGray
    October 31, 2005
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    this is cool! i like this a lot...great job Sakura! sorry for the blah comment but im kinda braindead right now, hehe. thanks for entering!
    s and s
    ~Shion