creepy creator

a world created 1

in my dark design2

a world where nothing3

and everything is mine4

my essence spirls 5

through empty space6

every object and all7

objects mirrior my face8

fear, happiness9

never disappear10

unless I decide11

I don't want them here12

taste my embrace13

engulf my rath14

when I come forward15

clear me a path16

I care not for your worship17

you'll join me in death18

and every time you take in air19

you'll be breathing my breath

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I wrote this but never published it...eh, hope u like it

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  • Farhan gold member
    November 6

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    Ah yes, i liked it. This was a nice poem. Flow was good. Idea was also nice. All in all, a nice read. i enjoyed your poem very much. .
    Thanks for giving me such a nice poem and good luck in the contest.
    Happy writing.
    Farhan.