Words Of You ♥ [poem]

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I wanted to write a story
But words of you
Were all I could manage2

I wanted to tell a tale
But words of you
Were all I could speak3

I wanted to sing a song
But words of you
Were all I could sing4

I wanted to make a poem
But words of you
Were all I wrote5

I wanted to write a story
But words of you
Were all I knew

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  • Lady Eventide Greeters member
    October 25

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    Gah! This was beautiful. It's almost as if you know the beat of my heart and were able to make this story in sync with it. Awesome, awesome poem. I'm not one for critiquing poems, but I don't think this would actually needs one. Awesome!!!

  • Heart Breakee
    October 18

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    ***** Five Stars

    This is such a great poem. I wrote a poem similar to that. It's called "Lovely Gun." Take a look at it--we must be on the same wavelength! Great job I'll look at the rest of your poems list.


  • I Dare to Dream
    October 18
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    Bee-Yew-Tee-Ful.

    Okay? Okay.

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