Todd the Terrible

Todd the Terrible, monster of the moor1

Married a butcher and called her a whore2

She solved the problem quick and clean3

Then Todd the terrible was seen no more 4

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  • xkontageousx
    October 25
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    booga booga

    Hooray for halloween stories! xD


  • cysils-baby-girl
    October 18
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    ah hah!

    do not insult ladies. especially ones who use knives for a living.
    great poem!


  • Elms Apprehended
    October 17
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    I love it.


  • Siibillam
    October 17
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    Short and sweet, with a great little death at the end. What more do you need in poetry?


  • lil.janie
    October 17

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    Oh my, so sweet. Did I just said 'sweet' for a killing? I must cut back with the horror movies...
    But really, short, and very nice. Me likey!


  • Little Lilly Angel
    October 17
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    Ok, so this was slightly random, and yet told a awsome tale, i think you should call a butcher a whore then


  • Len Shadow
    October 17
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    My guess is Tod was murdered. Girl powah!

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