Sedusha- (a little about me)

♥S he wasn't rich or poor like about average!1

♣E ager to enjoy the life that is unknown to me..2

♠D esire to find and make it 'BIG', if not then make it the 'BEST!!!'3

♥U nique girl grew up in two places, one was a country for a little while then US.4

♣S he had family from near to far and to father away5

♠H aven't seen too many things or even family for that matter!6

♥A girl grew to become a carefree, sweet young lady7

S...E...D...U...S...H...A...8

To share a little about myself9

And what kind of life I'm going through10

Not too bad, but I miss my family11

The ones that are farther away12

Even the one's that are far but near, too!13

You really can't get what you want14

So, I live with it...15

And I have been for almost '14 years'16

I don't really visit my farther away family17

And if your wondering why....18

I can't answer that, because I respected my Dad19

When he said I couldn't go with my mom!20

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Anyhow, hope you enjoyed this and if you want to know something IM me22

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  • pattyann4500
    November 2, 2005
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    This is lovely and very emotional. You have a loving heart. Hugs, Patricia

  • robert bolin
    November 2, 2005
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    This is a very powerful and sad poem of emotional yet detached love that shines on through you're heart, and you can tell by the words you use that you have a very radiant loving heart and
    This is a very beautifull brilliantly penned poem again thank you for allwoing me to read and comment on you're work rob..

  • xlove me tenderx
    October 31, 2005
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    cool buddy

  • saseychik0688
    October 31, 2005
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    this is good

  • tlsledge
    October 30, 2005
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    Pretty good job at an arostic. I have written many acrostics. One is FEAR F alse E valuation A bout R eality. All of mine are at my poetry section.

  • grannyeri
    October 30, 2005
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    Sounds like you are from a split family - a tough spot for any child, no matter what the age. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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