Halloween Poem

HALLOWEEN POEM:1

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This be the night4

get ready for a fright 5

Across the sky6

the witches fly on their brooms7

Monsters hiding in your rooms8

candy, candy, candy9

the dentist might come in handy10

You better cover your neck11

before the vamps take a bite12

tonight13

Tonight is Halloween 14

are you ready for a scream?15

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!16

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  • Chloe Stones
    November 1

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    wow i love that poem by the way how old r u? i am 11
    xxx


  • seamus gold member
    October 27
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    Great Sense of Humor

    really like "the dentist might come in handy." Nicely sketched.


  • CallMeWhenUrRich gold member
    October 19

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    Hehe, this poem has the same title as mine does, same contest too. Anyway, it was okay, except the rhyming meter was off at some parts but I liked it all the same. Good luck in the contest!

  • lola1096
    October 17
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    I really like except the fact some of the lines were from the internet


  • Hellcat Metal
    October 17

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    I like this. It's simple and it's about Hallowe'en! I do love poems that aren't always scary or spooky. Innocent poems about the candy and presenting humor that isn't dark is always good and I loved this poem for that. Thanks for entering.


  • Len Shadow
    October 17
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    "Candy candy candy, the dentist might come in handy"? XD
    That gave me a laugh!

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