Grim turned around to chase after lighter but i stoped him "wait dont Andrew.... i better go talk to him" i said then with that left allans arms and chased after lighter... by the time i ran down the stars i just saw him leave the house i ran as fast as i can "lighter wait please!" i shouted after him, "just leave Winter i get it... just leave" he said and in faster in the direction of the park.1
i knew that if i ran after him it won make a difference so i just slowed don to a walking paise but still followed him. i finally reached the park after a 10 minute walk, i stopped and looked around the park but couldnt see lighter "LIGHTER!! WERE ARE YOU" i shouted out and listened for a reply or for anymovement, but all i could hear is thunder i looked up at the sky and it was clowdy and the clouds were a very deep sade of grey. it was then that you hada flashback2
-Flash Back-3
it was 5 years ago when all was good in my life i was sitting at a pond with my friend tanishia (the one who commited suicide and left me at the worst of times) "krissy! look its a butterfly" tanishia said, while pointing at a beautiful dark blue and dark purple butterfly "wow its so beautiful" i said, "and its my fave colours" i said while smiling and with that tanishia jumped up and cought it, it was in her ands and she held it out for me. i picked it up and exmend it she started giggling at the expression on my face, which made me laugh and let go of the butterfly, therefor it flew away. 4
senconds later there was a loud crack. me and tanishia looked up at the sky and saw it was a very dark colour "looks like someone has died" said tanishia, i looked at her with a puzzled look "its how i gove a reason to a storm... wen ever it storms someone loved has committed suicide or was murdered"... i was quite... and deep in thought "ohh okay i guess i understand" i replyed while laughing, "you always were a little weard in the head", when i said that she started laughing all of a sudden it started raining so we both sprinted back to my place.5
-Flash Back ends-6
as i remember that i fall to the ground crying i crawl into a little ball and just sit there as it starts raining all i can feel is the cold watter dizziling on me as a lay there, two minutes later i here sticks break near by me, i dont even bother to move, "Winter" i hear a voice say my name i dont even care who it is i still dont react, "Winter are you alright?", "Just leve me alone" i reply.7
"kirten i-i am s-sorry please forgive me... i guess i kind of over reacted, please dont cry", i open my eyes and see lighter nealing down next to me, his eyes were all red and puffy from all the crying, "its not you lighter, and i am fine, you didnt over react i am just .... i am s-so s-sorry please forgive me its just i know you like me, and i like you to but i have stronger feelings for allan", lgither started tearing up again .. "pleaase lighter dont cry" i say to him "no its okay winter i am fine , but may i ask why are you crying?" he asks8
"well........."
Author notes
i noe its sort and sorry it to so long... i have been major busy ... tell me wat u think MUAH
Comments
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You need to reread and spell things correctly. it bothered me. but other than that it was pretty good. keep writing.
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i love it... get the next part out soon
pweaseee
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


