Beauty and the Beast CH:2

Chapter 21

Bella woke up the next morning and got dress. The snow was already falling and the town people were still inside their little houses probably still asleep. Most people don't get up till the shops start opening up and they didn't start till they at least got 3 cups of hot tea in their bellys to start working. This is the perfect time for Christabell to go to see her mothers grave unnoticed. She really didn't want Fablio chasing after her, flirting in the worst possible way.2

She got her warmest clothes on, her mother's white dress and a blueish coat and headed out the door. The sky was still dark and the moon still lit the sky. 3

When she entered the forest she felt like she was being watched. She swore she could even hear someone behind her but she passed it off as being paranoid since she was scared Fablio would find her.4

She continued walking until finally she came to a small mound inside a cave. It was said this cave where her mother was kept was magical but she merely passed it off as an old legend thinking it was so if her or her father went to see their loved one they wouldn't be bothered.5

Christabell walked inside the cave and stood beside the grave.6

Thoughts racing through her head. Like the time her mother told her bedtime stories, or the time they played a game where they would boil up some water and place spices, bugs and flowers and some other things in a put over a fire and say weird poems. She even remembered the time when she asked her mother what her name was and she answered "You have no need to know my name! Just remember all I've taught you. To you my name is mom. OK?" Of course now she knew that her mother really does have a name but her father won't open up to her about it. So she just gave up asking and went about her way..7

Suddenly Christabell felt something in her.. fear. 8

She got up only to find the entrance was covered with wolves. She let out a scream and seen they came closer.  She didn't know what to do. So she just froze up. She was paralyzed from fear. She couldn't even hear the growl that  came from an outside force. All she could see was that the wolves turned and ran off; then she seen black as she passed out.9

She woke up to find her self in a bed. A nice bed. Look very old but was kept neatly. She looked around and seen Pictures of far away lands and a big closet door.... Then she seen a big, dark figure. The siluate looked almost like a demon or something. She was going to scream but couldn't let it out. 10

"Welcome to my keep. You will be kept here until I can decide what to do with you."11

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  • blackrabbit.
    June 16
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    ahem!

    -taps foot-

    part three good sir?

  • Nightwish girl
    October 31, 2005
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    I like this! It's different from the traditional version but hey when where we ever traditional!?
    Love
    Brandy

  • fallenangel006
    October 29, 2005
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    i love that last line its so onimious i like this story


  • SueMason
    October 29, 2005
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    lovely story u have going on here...can't wait to read the other chapters