Wolf Warriors

Katana was a natural loner but one night she came upon a young human.She felt a strange urge to approach the human.Going against her instincta she approaches and is suprised when the human reaches out and pets her.Little do they know its just the begining.1

Katana is a young sand colored wolf with bright green eyes.2

Nye is an older chocolate colored wolf with gray eyes,a mentor.3

Natu is a young,Katana's age, bronze colored wolf,an orphan4

Bak is a youhg human,with black hair and green eyes,cheifs son5

Tys is a young human,with brown hair and hazel eyes,orphan

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I don't have very many characters,so if you want to be in this. Please leave a name,desciption,age and some personality traits, unless you don't care how they act.Also,make sure you tell me if they're human or not.

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  • BorntoWrite
    October 23

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    Akako

    Half-wolf husky mix, mostly black. Yellow eyes. Young adult.

    Very aggressive, possessive and territorial, although she only "owns" very little territory (that she recently liberated from the edge of another packs' domain. Squatters rights and such.
    Strong enough and smart enough to be able to hold onto her small position of power. Yet still young enough to make some stupid strategical mistakes. She has a long way to go before anyone is willing to join her new pack.

    Or maybe it would be best for she herself to join the larger, stronger pack that has a leader who knows what their doing...?

    Anyway, here Angel, my wolfy character for you. Hope you can use her.
    ~Etch

    • Angel07
      October 24
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      Thanks I'll find a place for her don't worry.
      Hope you'll read the finished product.
      Angel


  • Bluewolf2222
    October 17

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    This sounds very cool. Here's my idea for a character.

    Name: Desper
    Gender: Male
    description: A black wolf with silver eyes, a white blaze down his chest.
    age: half a year old. Almost Adult; teenage.
    Personality: Aggressive, thinks fighting is the answer to everything. Is overly protective of friends and family, but loves to laugh.

    There you go! that's mine. Use Desper if you wish; i can't wait to read more. I love a good wolf story.

    Keep Howling, Angel!

    beginning: 2, language: 3, plot: 1, ending: 2, dialog: 3, characters: 4.

    • Angel07
      October 17
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      thanks for the comment.I think Desper sounds like he could fit in with the little group I have so far.


  • NarniaKid
    October 14
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    Yes! It sounds good! I can't wait to read more!

    -Crystal

    • Angel07
      October 14
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      Thanks for the comment.I will write more as soon as I have more characters.Feel free to create your own to be in it.The human Katana meets isn't named yet,so any ideas let me know.


  • Weed
    October 13

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    I want to be in the story!!!!!!! This is my wolf.


    Name: Weed
    Fur: blue and white
    Eyes: blue
    Gender: she-wolf
    Age: less then a year old


    She is very kind and she puts her friends frist.

    • Angel07
      October 14
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      Thanks for the comment and your character. I'll start the story after a get some more characters.

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