Does It Last Forever?

Does it Last Forever?1

Chapter One:2

He whispered softly into her ear “I swear I’ll never leave you, Keiko. I love you too much.” 3

And as he spoke those words to her, her eyes filled and overflowed with tears. She wanted to believe him. She did believe him. She found it impossible to look into his eyes and tell him no. She just couldn’t do it. She was so in love. She was so caught up in the moment that when she felt his hands wander to places that most people left untouched, she had no notion to resist. 4

She gave herself to Naoki that night. All because she thought that he would never leave her. 5

But reality is never that sweet. 6

~~~7

3 months later:8

Keiko was alone. Totally and completely alone. Well, she couldn’t say that she was completely alone; she did have a child inside of her, 3 months along. Naoki had gotten her pregnant that night. 9

And all her friends told her that she wouldn’t get pregnant on her first time. They were wrong. 10

Two weeks after that blissful night, Keiko found Naoki locking lips with another girl from the Shibuya area. Apparently, he didn’t love her as much as she had hoped. 11

to be continued...12

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  • AdarkEXITstence
    October 29, 2005
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    Mary got pregnant from a kid named Tom who said he was in love
    He said don't worry about a thing baby doll I'm the man you've been dreamin' of
    But three months later he said he won't date her or return her call
    And she sweared god damn if I find that man I'm cuttin' off his balls
    And then she heads for the clinic and she gets some static walkin' through the doors
    They call her a killer, and they call her a sinner, and they call her a whore

    yeha it was really good when everlast did it to. lol no but forreal prety good not much htere to go on but hey egerly awaiting the rest