Meaningless in All Circumstances

Rainbows scatter across the street,
tripping me up and letting me slide into the concrete.
I smile and laugh even as I try to deny,
the crows making it impossible to fly.1

Nightmare after nightmare waiting in my head,
the basement door is open, torn to shreds.
I smile and laugh even as they crawl their way out,
footprints on the stairs leaving no room for doubt.2

Storm clouds span across the sky,
with my mouth shut I can’t say goodbye.
I smile and laugh even as I feel like I’m taken away,
the stripes of the rainbow turning into a field of grey.

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  • Girl Anachronism
    October 13

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    Wow! This is fantastic.

    I'm not sure what it's supposed to be about but I kind of have and idea. The imagery is wonderful. My favorite line is the last one: "The stripes of the rainbow turning into a field of grey."

    You're a fantastic poet. I can't wait for your next work.


  • xForever17
    October 12
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    This is so creepy. The background doesn't match at all. It kind of does but it doesn't. Like.... is the person going crazy?