Dramatic Story (Twilight AND Taylor Swift Spoof)

We were both young when I first saw you1

I close my eyes2

And the flashback starts3

I'm standing there4

On school grounds in chilly air5

See the lights,6

See the teens the heavy coats7

See you make your way through the crowd8

And say hello9

Little did i know10

That you were Edward you were throwing glances11

And my daddy said stay away from Bella12

And i was crying on the staircase13

Begging you please don’t go, and i said14

Edward take me somewhere we can be alone15

I’ll be waiting all there's left to do is run16

You’ll be the vampire and I’ll be the victim17

Its dramatic story baby just bite me18

So i sneak out to the woods to see you19

We keep quiet 'cause we’re dead if they knew20

So close your eyes21

Let’s escape this town for a little while22

Cause you were Edward i was a brand of heroine23

And my daddy said stay away from Bella24

But you were everything to me25

I was begging you please don’t go and i said26

Edward takes me somewhere we can be alone27

I’ll be waiting all there's left to do is run28

You are the vampire and I’ll be the victim29

Its dramatic story baby just bite me30

Edward save me, they're trying to tell me how to feel31

This love is difficult, but its real32

Don’t be afraid we’ll make it out of this mess33

Its dramatic story baby just bite me34

Oh, Oh35

I got tired of waiting36

Wondering if you were ever coming around37

My faith in you was fading38

When i met you on the outskirts of town, and I said39

Edward save me I’ve been feeling so alone40

I keep waiting for you but you never come41

Is this in my head, i don’t know what to think42

He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said43

Marry me Bella you’ll never have to be alone44

I love you and that's all I really know45

I talked to your dad go pick out a shiny car46

Its dramatic story baby just says yes47

Oh, Oh,48

We were both young when i first saw you49

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  • B Chandler Greeters member
    October 13

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    I have to agree with SageSyren on this. I don't know if sticking some of the words together was purposely done or not, but nevertheless, this was well written and on its own little beat.


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    October 12

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    Well the rhythm was good. Stayed pretty much with the beat of the song. But I wondered about the words you stuck together. Did you do that on purpose? It's very distracting.

    Good luck in the contests.
    Brooke