Apocalyptic Skies

Another winter looms and humanity diminishes a little more; there isn’t anything to hope for, not since the skies turned grey.

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I like sentences

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  • Anti Creative
    October 22

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    I like sentences, too, & I like your sentence, because your sentence hooks me in & makes me want to read more. Do you have more?? Do ya?! DO YA!>? I NEED MORE!!! IM AN ADDICT!!! I NEED. MORE. SENTENCES> GURRRARRAGGHH!!

    Sorry, this is Anti Creative's brother, AntiAnti Creative. Anti Creative has been subdued, restrained, & has been taken into Sentence Rehab. We'd like to thank you for your sentence, for his fix, & for pushing him off the deep end. Thanks, Zombie.


  • CallMeWhenUrRich gold member
    October 15

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    Hehe, me too! For some reason, this sentence kinda reminds me of some of the problems our generation is facing now, such as gobal warming and such. But I might have misintepreted that and perhaps it's of a fantasy genre or something else, though it seems fantasy-like.

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!!