Always Shuttered Windows

I’m trying to get in when there’s nobody home,
I yell and scream even though I’m all alone.
I cry and ask myself, “what’ll it be?”,
what I want to have said is so warped I can’t even see.
Playing back what happened in my head,
I can’t seem to remember what I actually said.
It’s happened like this year after year,
memories come then disappear.
Like ribbons flowing out to sea,
the windows are locked so “what’ll it be?”.
Please, let me see.
Please please, just leave me.

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  • Anti Creative gold member
    October 11, 2009

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    =[ *Hugs lenore* You'll receive the peace of your mind eventually, darling. Just believe in yourself, & keep writing everything you feel at the moment they're felt!