Super Hero School

They came to the Super Hero School Sleep Over and chose 1

a Super Hero name and super power.2

They had their faces painted and made capes3

tested their speed, strength, aim and jumping ability to see 4

if they met the standards for the Super Hero School.5

All passed and soon they rescued stuffed animals from a burning building,6

captured the evil snake villain and saved the boy who was suspended 7

over the rapids.8

They watched The Incredibles.9

Next morning all received a graduation certificate10

from Super Hero School, and a Beaver Sleep Over crest11

before returning to their parents and their human powers.12

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Beavers, young Cubs under 7, took part in this Super Hero School last weekend in our community. It was so cute.

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  • fusaoufh
    March 11, 2006
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    mind if i put you on my favorites list?

  • fusaoufh
    March 11, 2006
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    inspiring

    Next morning all received a graduation certificate
    from Super Hero School, and a Beaver Sleep Over crest
    before returning to their parents and their human powers.

    i loved this line and captured the heart of every child's dream, my childhood dream included. this concept of a magical carpet type event... how you can be whatever you want to be with great freedom and privilege. this is such a pure and uplifting theme and it made me smile. inside many children are imaginary artists waiting for their potential to be taped as the pure superheroes of the world.

  • Danna Hobart
    February 28, 2006
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    This made me smile! I was thinking that they watched Sky High, but The Incredibles would do it too Thanks for entering.

  • veritas
    December 7, 2005
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    very cute. my brother was once a cub scout-i remember well how cute he was. then he grew up. ah memory. your story is well written.

  • Billie Jean
    November 21, 2005
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    Nice story. I enjoyed reading this one. Kids must like it very much. I do too.


  • Lady Eclipse
    November 10, 2005
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    Lovely imagination. I was always the one being rescued by the heros when we played supper heros and villians when I was a kid. I remember being mad cause I never got any special powers. lol.....ahhh memories... Great job ~Lady Eclipse

  • Malabu
    October 30, 2005
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    Ohhh gee.....I cant wait till I grow up....although im still a widdle kidd in ma cradle....I want to go to super hero school to learn to fly.....be a worthy challenger to the super crooks and spies......I wish I wish I wish.....I was super Mally flying high in the air.....coming to ever damsel in distress kissing them making them sigh..... love your cute lil poemie....here grans.....
    Huggies
    Malabuuuuuuuu

  • Rowan gold member
    October 29, 2005
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    I agree, this is too cute, being a mom of teens, I wish I had thought of this! A Superhero Sleep over School with certificates, how cool is that!
    I guess I'll have to wait for grandkids! A while off, I hope!


  • Tangled Angle
    October 28, 2005
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    lol. That was short- but very good! Awesome job and keep up the good work! -Tyler


  • IrishYndina Greeters member
    October 28, 2005
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    This is sooo cute! I love it! I can just picture all those little tykes prancing around in capes saving their teddy bears from the ferocious neighbor's dog, lol. Not quite sure what the boy suspended over the rapids is...I'm picturing one of the little kids leaning over a little creek or something, but it's a little vague. Maybe you want to choose a different image, one that fits a bit more with the kids involved and can be understood by all who read it. Just a thought, it's still really really cute Thanks for sharing!

  • misticmoonlite
    October 28, 2005
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    I wanna join in this festive event!!lol sounded like fun! thank you for sharing..Linda


  • Image and Visions silver member
    October 28, 2005
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    granny, once again you are just to much! great humor and dear to the heart. image and visions

  • Lyrical Soul
    October 28, 2005
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    This made me think about all those incredible people, magical characters and silly creatures I became...in my mind...as a child. Very cute story grannyeri. I enjoyed the read.

    ~Lyrical


  • -playing-dead-
    October 28, 2005
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    i love this story!!!!!!! this is soo gd, id love to b younger agen, carefree, n living a dream world, thats the best!!!!!!!! xxxx

  • Yvon Cormier
    October 28, 2005
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    Lovable

    I'm a dad so I really appreciate this story. Especially since all super heroes start off as little luv luvs

    P.S. You might want to edit "to see if the met" to read "to see if they met"


  • NoWayJo
    October 28, 2005
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    this is really a precious piece of writing Gran! it just so reminds me of the little boys that come around trick-or-treating on Halloween, one super-hero after another. and the little girls all fairy princesses! but really cute, and if you took pictures at the time of this event, posting one to this poem would be great!

    really a fun poem, and glad I had the chance to read this!

    Jo


  • WildlifeDoc
    October 28, 2005
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    TO BE A KID AGAIN! Great job Granny......its so sweet and endearing, you always write the best little pieces! I always love them...........Doc


  • richiesnana
    October 28, 2005
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    I love it- very good

    I really like this it is good, a lot was said and it is short and sweet
    Very good, I would like to read more of what you have.
    Keep writing, and good luck.
    Kisses; Sue

  • JD Elix
    October 28, 2005
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    GREAT

    PERFECT, REMINDS ME OF MY DAUGHTER SLEEP OVER SEVERAL NIGHTS AGO.

  • Orionus Ranmeri
    October 28, 2005
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    Aww, I can just see a group of little kids playing Superhero with little capes and stuff! Great description here, and i hope those kids never grow up on the inside.

  • TooRainbow
    October 28, 2005
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    WOW! Thanks so much for posting this! You should read Image and Visions's peice called "I Read Them Stories" along with my comment to get some more ideas like this one. I'm sure he/she would love it if you pointed this work out. This is excellent!
    Sheryl

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