Mr. Ricordo

He looks at me with his chocolate brown eyes. I sighed. Lust filled my every breath. I breathed in deeply knowing it would bring our admonends closer. We sway in a seemingly light manner as if we were facing each other on a swing. I stared at his lips pretending to make light conversation but I shivered as his eyes undress me. 1

My back towards the wall, we bounce. Feeling him jerk and harden at every intersection. I, playing innocent ran a finger tracing his full lips and well bone structured cheeks. He casually thust his knee between my legs, bringing us more intimately together and his hands ran down my sides, his thumbs brushing my nipples. I looked up, the fire in his eyes burnt me up. 2

With regret I eased out of his arms to head to class. We have reached our limits but as I went to turn the corner. The lips, the lips that I have been allowed to look and dreamed about, took their rightful place. I sighed. The kiss was passionate, fierce yet gentle. I melted in his arms but soon we parted...until the next day.

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I know this is mild erotica but it is my fantasy. I hope you like it.

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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    October 12

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    mild, but beautifully done anyway Good work- I liked it

    P2: He casually thust his knee between my legs

    I think you meant 'thrust'

    Overall, a very enjoyable read Thank you for entering this in the contest. Your details were done well.

    Pixie


  • blueberryjam456
    October 12
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    gooo

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 4.


  • blueberryjam456
    October 12
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    well done u should make a part 2

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 4.