I gotta take my chance.

[Verse 1]1

I need to let my gaurds down,
and fall fearlessly in love with you.
I'm gonna have to take a risk,
im gonna have to take a chance.2

Just to get you,
just to be in your heart.3

[Chorus]4

Cuz if I stay shy,
i'll probably never have the chance.
For you and me to fall into romance,
I just gotta take a chance.5

[Verse 2]6

I shouldn't be so scared,
to fall in love with you.
I should be taking a chance,
and talking to you.7

I should force myself to stay calm,
and we will be okay.8

[Chorus]9

And if I stay shy,
all the time.
I won't ever have the chance,
for you and I to fall into romance.10

Just gotta take my chances.11

[Bridge]12

I would do anything,
to be by yourside.
And I would do anything,
to have you by myside.13

Forever...
and always.14

[Chorus]15

And if I stay shy,
all the time.
I won't ever have the chance,
for you and I to fall into romance.16

Just gotta take my chances.17

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  • wmmelvin
    October 11
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    1 word "Beautiful"

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Anti Creative
    October 11

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    Eh..

    I admire how the narrator was open with the one he/she wants, as I'm sure most people have felt this way-- but, for a poem, it's too basic & generic for my taste. Not enough description, either artistically or romantically. As lyrics, though, that's where I think you need to turn it into song, you know

    beginning: 2, language: 1, plot: 3, ending: 2.


    • LilMissFearless
      October 11
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      lmao.. it is a song. thanks

      • Anti Creative
        October 11
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        I realize it's a song, hence the verses, but that doesn't mean it still doesn't read as poetry Have you listened to "The Drunken Boat" by Simon Joyner or listened to Bob Dylan? Easily one of their songs could be read as poetry-- heck, some poems ARE made into lyrics. "Peace Frog" was made of 2 poems from Jim Morrison's high school days at UCLA. But your welcome, I wish I could be more helpful.

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