I sit here in the hospital bed. Alone and scared waiting for them to come back with the results. It may or may not have worked. You see i have cancer and I came to this hospital 2 days ago for a bonemarrow transplant. I'm scared and dont know what to expect Iknow from the past not to get my hopes up in it working. This is my second one I'm worried it did not work. I am not scared of death just not quiet ready for it. In life I am happy, good boyfriend, great friends, nice family, the dream life, besides the cancer.
advice please!!!
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It has sooo much potential. You could make an entire story just on this one paragraph.
Do a part about what life was like before you got cancer.
Do a couple parts on when you have cancer; surgeries, what your family thought, your emotions
Do a part (or a couple) on when you got rid of it or the last couple days before you "died" (if this is fictional)
I would suggest working on the grammar though. If you have Microsoft Office Word, copy (Ctrl+C) your info. and paste (Ctrl+V) it on to a document. Then, use Grammar and Spelling Check (F7) to make all the grammar perfect!
Good job overall though, it is a very emotional piece!
-Crazy7Chick
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Welcome to StoryWrite
Wow. Much respect for what you are going through. While I really cannot tell you how to handle your situation, I really believe that anytime we can honestly write about anything that is going on, we can handle it better and possibly even help others in the process. It is good that you acknowledge the good things in your life though. You are most definately on my prayer list.
Please keep us posted on results and progress. In the meantime, keep writing and again, welcome to the site.
Violet
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