Hiding In Darkness

She's hides in darkness
slowly wallowing in her own pain
slowly dying
withering into nothing.1

He pushed her down
till nothing could bring her up
he showed her how unimportant she was.2

He was better
she was trash
she had problems
things were bad.3

He pushed her to the bottom
and now she can't climb back
everything was different
no longer can she stand the harsh words.4

He bruised her
he hurt her
her emotions were awry
nothing else could bring her alive.5

Dead inside is what she has become
no longer does her future seem so bright
no longer does her future seems so right
instead she sees failure
instead she sees nothing but darkness.6

He pushed her down
so far into the ground
that no longer can she stand alone.

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  • MsAlee gold member
    October 11

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    *tears gather in the corner of my eyes* i'm so sorry to see that this tis a bit personal. i hate seeing that someone, anyone, makes a person feel so down that they can not stand anymore for themself.


    • ForestFaery
      October 11
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      ah havn't seen you or T in a while hello again and it's fine my brother can be a jerk so I get over it


  • TNTrouble
    October 10

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    Damn ... tis fucking heartbreaking tis what this is. I hope tis not a personal sitchy you are currently involved in. Very well written and emotional piece.

    • ForestFaery
      October 10
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      actually T it kinda is but it's all good i just keep looking to the fact i have one more year. Being 18 now has it's ups and the fact that I'll be away from him soon