Dedicated to Change

Dedicated to Change-A poem by Barbara ____1

I'm writing this poem about so far,
the changes I have witnessed.
About me, In my own life2

That's why this poem that I'm
writing is Dedicated To Change.3

About how far,how long, and how much.
I have gone a long way so far.
I have seen a lot so far.
And I have done a lot so far.4

But you see there is still a lot to go
you see I am only a 13 year old girl.I
I know a whole lot for only being 13,
but there's a lot more to learn.5

I haven't got a clue, but when you're only 13
you have plenty of time to figure things out.6

I am the one who i know has changed the most,
my school's and grades have changed
by far,
my family, my friends, and my pets,
they have all changed also.7

But for also now I have glasses, I now scrapbook,
and have a secret. my life has changed.

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  • SororalAngel
    October 12

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    Well, The Colour font is hard to see! I have to highlight everything! But I'm glad You see this, Everyone changes, and everyone needs to change before their present-self stays permanent, or hard to move that no one tries. :/. Well-done!

    beginning: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 4.