Boy picks girl up. Normally girl would pick boy up, but with today's high gas prices, they can pay for that.1
Should have said this first, but boy pays for everything. So boy buys the tickets. 2
After standing in line for three hours, girl realizes boy is dull and boring, but keeps being nice to get the over priced, novelty tee-shirt. 3
Once inside the venue, girl will stay with boy until someone better comes along.4
When better opportunity comes along, girl ditches boy when boy's back is turned and has a great time with the cool guy.5
Boring boy endlessly searches for the cool girl, what for some unseen miracle he had somehow snagged, not paying attention to the show.6
At end of show boy finds girl and they leave together.7
Boy: Where'd you run off to?8
Girl: Um...I was in the bathroom...9
Boy: It took you two hours to go to the bathroom?10
Girl: Have you seen those lines?11
Boy: Point taken. So...What go out again later?12
Girl: Um...No...I don't think I'm ready for a relationship at the moment...13
Meanwhile, girl is programing cool guy's phone number into her phone.14
Author notes
I had to write this for a project in my sociology class today...Neither me nor my partner would do this...We just wanted it to be different...
What did you think? Please comment!
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So who actually had the perfect date? From the sounds of it I'm guessing it's the girl. This could actually make a pretty interesting story, I'm not sure what kind of grade you got for yur sociology class but I hope it was a good one. -
This is really cute. LOL I wouldn't do it to a guy either. That's how I got my first husband.
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That girl sounds like she is a bitch, but hey, whatever, to each their own. I love it, i would have done the same thing if it was about six months ago, that's just the kind of person I was, but yeah, I've changed since then, surprisingly, I was getting to the point I didn't think that I would be able to change even if given the chance, but I got the chance, now I'm straitened out with an awesome boyfriend who isn't lame or any of the sort, he's awesome, and I love him, but enough of my rambling, I love this piece, and I hope to see more stuff like it, it's a nice break from everything else I read.
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that's like really funny and i like the style a lot.
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Awsome.
This is a good story. I like it. -
this is interesting..never read anything like it before. you are talented...Keep it up! Take care
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awesome and funny
lol sarah i love your stories the are fucking awesome i tell u
this is sad but its so true girls are bad are we not oh well c ya
love ya sarah
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however unfortunate... i can see this happening.
I think it's funny but yeah a little choppy. if that was what you were going for, then all power to you!!! nice job!
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ughh me caveman lol that's what the story sounds like... is it supposed to be so choppy?
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This is not a poem......and your not 17!?????
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Lol..cool. Can see this happening...but still......unfair on the guy! And I'd say that if it was the other way around as well
. Good stuff. ~ Osarkon
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thats mean....I mean if that dude knew what happened...he would feel like hell...I know I did when that happened...it really hurts...I mean this is a good piece...but yea...thats...thats messed up.
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that girl sounds mean man...lol Poor guy. Anyway, great poem and it got me laughing on a dull and boring Wednesday (sp?)
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lol, omg.. That's very interesting and tells a neat story of how quickly betrayal comes and goes. Yet what one can say they love someone without being enticed by other goods. it's a vicious circle, but plain as day. Awesome job on this project sarah. i give it a A+
~Ryan~
luv ya!
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