Shhh! Tell Them I Fell

Why do you hurt me?
I sit and wonder1

You words Hurt,
they crack like thunder2

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You shove me around,4

when we're all alone
You whisper nice things,
when we're on the phone5

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Your grips too tight, 
you dont feel my pain
The sun is shining,
yet I beg for rain 7

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Deep down I love you,
I know I should not
I need to know if you love me,
but my voice is caught9

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I get the nerve to ask you,
you just hold me tight
You say your sorry,
you dont want to fight11

You beg for forgivness,
I see sadness in your face
I know your not lying,
My heat begins to race12

For the first time you say,
I love you so much
I drop to my knees, 13

I feel your light touch14

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Your holding my tight, 16

my head on your chest
This moment was great,
the very best17

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One single tear,
stains your cheek
I tried to laugh,
it was very bleak19

You planted a kiss,
on top of my head
A smile tugges at my mouth ,
my face blushed a vivid red20

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From then on I knen,
you'd never tell a lie
untill one cold night,
when you whisperd goodbye22

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My word shatterd around me
I lost myself and all my control
Then soon after,
it took its toll 24

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I ran to the roof
I was angry as hell
I made my jump
'Shhh, Tell them I fell 26

I losst my breath, 27

Before I made it to the ground
I hit it hard,
but without a sound28

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  • PurpleScene.
    October 13
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    Three Cheers For Sweet Revenge!

    It had some misspelled words but the end was kick ass.
    "Shhh tell them I fell"
    The beginning was sad also.


  • awesomecore.
    October 9
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    ur poems r amazing

    your a very good writer =D