Becky-Anne

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Becky-Anne;2

I want to hide away From you; embarrassed.3

For I was in love with you;4

But you were only playing games.5

How was I to know?6

You were my first;7

The experience I shan’t forget.8

You crushed me in the play ground;9

When you dismissed me as a joke;10

In front of, all our friends.11

I cried, hot tears of hurt and anger;12

Humiliated; frustrated in pain.13

I ran away from you14

Theirs and your laughter in my ears15

I am in love with you;16

Becky-Anne!17

I will never tell you again18

Afraid for any to see but myself;19

I will shroud my torch;20

That I carry for you.21

It may dim and gutter at times;22

But I’ll trim the wick,23

And keep it bright.24

Becky-Anne;25

You crushed me.26

But you couldn’t put out the light.27

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  • hchsknights08
    October 8
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    I loved this.

    FANTASTIC job.

    Good luck~

  • Marta gold member
    October 8

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    Nothing more bittersweet than unrequited love. Thank you for sharing your poem, the best reads are the ones written from the heart and/or real life.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.