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An Emo Love Story2
HOW YOU MET: You were on vacation and went to the mall for your last day. You saw this guy staring at you as you checked out of Hot Topic. You walk past him and ignore him because you need to hurry in order to catch your plane. You glanced at him once before you left the mall and finally he went to talk to you. “Hey im Riverr.” He said. “Im _____.” You Say. He Then Says, “I can drive you there if you want.” You Say, “Ok.” He drives you to the house that you stayed in and you got your clothes and he drove you to the airport, kissed you goodbye (even though you just met) and you got on the plane. You were surprised about what just happened. You had to see him again. STORY: When you got home you told your mom and dad what happened. She said that you couldn’t go back but it turns out your friend is going to stay in the same hotel as you. You beg your mom to let you stay with your friend. She finally says yes. You thank her and go off with your friend the next day. You and your friend leave too Oklahoma where the vacations spot was. You go to the same mall you saw that same guy. He was no where to be found. You sadly walk out of the mall. As you walk out the door you feel someone’s hands around your waist.3
You turn around and see Riverr. He kisses you passionately and you can feel all eyes on you guys. He takes you too his place and you kiss all the way up to his room. You think about what you’re doing and pull away. “What’s Wrong _____?” Riverr asks. You reply, “Nothing it’s just that I don’t know you all that well but yet I fell like ive known you my whole life. I feel safe with you. I want you Riverr. But I just met you.” He looks at you with sad eyes and apologizes. 4
You kiss him once more. You pull your shirt back up and sat on the bed next to him. You looked at him with concerned eyes. He looked back with a tear rolling down his cheek. As you wiped the cheek away you say, “Riverr? What’s wrong? Did I hurt you? It’s just that I just met you.” He smiles but then it quickly vanishes. He asks, “_____, May I kiss you?” you nod and he plants the most passionate kiss on your lips. You gently kiss him back with the same amount of passion. All of a sudden Riverr’s best friend Austin barges in Riverr’s bedroom door. “Hey Riverr.” Austin Says. Riverr replies with a wave. 5
Austin sits on the bed next to you and Riverr. He looks at you and licks his lips and says, “Hey sexy, who might you be?” You just look from Austin to Riverr. Finally you look at Austin and say, “Um….. Im here with Riverr. Sorry. But we could be friends. I’m Riverr’s Girlfriend for now.” Riverr just looks a little puzzled. He looked at you and asked you to come in the hall for a minute. “You stay here Austin.” He said. You follow Riverr in the hall way and looked into his eyes deeply. He asked, “_____, you’re my girlfriend? I mean I thought you just met me?” You looked worried at him and said, “Riverr, I love you. And even though I just met you I feel like ive known you all my life.” He smiled and looked at you and said, “_____, I love you too. I feel the same way. I feel like Ive known you forever. And I just…” She cut him off with a kiss so passionate. “Do you think we could go back to making out on my bed now?” Riverr said as he smiled. You nodded. He told Austin that he had to go and pushed you on his bed. He got on top of you and made out with you hard core. 6
You pull off his shirt while he unzips your pants. You once again think about what you’re doing and want to stop but your body wants this. He pulls from the kiss to smile at you. You look at him worried. He asks, “What’s Wrong Sweetie? Have you done this before? What’s wrong? Just tell me.” You look and smile as you tell him, “Riverr, your right I’m still a virgin. I don’t know how to do this. What should I do because my I want this but everyone tells me it’s gonna hurt.” “It will hurt but then it will start to get better, babe. I promise.” He said with reassuring eyes. You look at him and smile while taking his pants off. As you get his pants to his knees he gets off you and pulls them the rest of the way off.7
He pulls your pants off and takes your red lacy thong off. He flings it across the room like a rubber band. You giggle. He chuckles a little bit and back to kissing your neck. You let out a small moan. He smiles in the kiss. You take full control. You are now both naked and getting ready. You have that worried look on your face again. He looks at you and smiles, “_____, its ok. It won’t hurt for that long. It will start to feel good in a minute.” You smile and he plants a kiss on your lips. He starts to tease you a bit. Finally you say, “Don’t tease me. Just do it.” With that he smiles and softly and slowly teases you again. You let out another soft moan as he shoves his long shaft inside of you. 8
You whimper because of the pain. Suddenly you feel and warm substance roll down you leg. You sit up quick and look to see what it is. Its blood. You start to worry because your period is over and you’re bleeding. He lays you back down and kisses you cheek. “Its ok, baby. I only popped your cherry. I took your innocence.” You look at him with a smile as he shoves in and out again and again. It’s starting to feel good. 8 MONTHS LATER: You realize that you’re getting fatter. You guys are having passionate sex while you are preggerz. But you and Riverr didn’t know you are pregnant. His parents open the door and your hear it slam. You both quickly get up and get your clothes on. You here footsteps coming up the stairs. “_____, Hide in the closet. If my dad catches you he’ll hurt us both. My parents are drunk every time they home. I don’t want you to get hurt.” You quickly run into the closet and sit there with tears running down your face. You hear the bedroom door open so you hide in the pile of clothes. “Riverr! Boy get your ass over here this instant! You are in so much trouble boy!” Riverr runs to his dad and asks, “Father, What did I do?” “You fucking brought a girl in this house? Where is the little bitch? I want to hurt her!” You sat there just listening to what was going on. You heard a big smack.9
You also heard someone crying. You peeked out the door. You saw Riverr on the floor with tears rolling down his face. You stepped out of the closet and screamed, “DON’T HURT HIM! HE DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!” He looks at you with a smile and looks at Riverr and says, “Is this the girl ill be hurting? She’s mighty fine. Ill enjoy hurting her.” You look at Riverr with a tear rolling down your face. Riverr’s dad comes toward you don’t know what to do so you back into the wall. He grabs you by the neck and lifts you up off the ground. He slaps you a couple of times. And finally rips your clothes off. 10
He pulls down his pants only to his knees before Riverr comes at him and pushes him down to the ground making you fall to the ground. You’re breathing hard because of his hand holding your neck. You’re sitting there naked while Riverr gets slapped and punched. Finally Riverr’s dad locks him in the closet and comes towards you. He throws you on the bed and starts to get on top of you. He kisses you. You become terrified as he starts kissing you on the nipple. You are hoping for Riverr to break out of the closet. But sadly he doesn’t. You wait a couple of minutes while he rapes you and hit him as hard as you could with the alarm clock. He falls to the ground in pain. You think he’s unconscious. But you get up and run to the closet that Riverr was locked in.11
You quickly unlock the door and see Riverr sitting there crying. He looks up and sees you. He runs to you and throws you over his shoulder. He runs out of the room and puts you in the back seat of the car and he hops in the driver’s seat. His car won’t start. Uh-oh. His dad starts to run out of the house after you. Riverr gets the car started. Thank god for letting it start. You drive down the street as Riverr’s dad runs after you naked. Riverr slams on the gas and you guys go flying down the street. You finally get to your favorite park and you stay in the car while Riverr goes towards the swings. He signals you to come sit down on the swings. You nod a ‘no’. He comes towards the car and opens the door wide to your naked self. “_____, I’m so sorry. I didn’t think he would come home drunk. I just thought he mite come home and ask you to leave. I’m sorry I just……didn’t know.” You look at him with reassuring eyes. You pull him in for a kiss. You kiss him for like 2 seconds and pull away. You look at him and say, “Riverr, im cold.” He looks at your naked body one more time and says, “Ok ok. Let’s go to the store and ill buy you some new clothes.” “I can’t go in. Im naked!” “Oh yea! Uhm well, where do you want to go?” “Can we just go to my hotel or something?” “Uhh, Yea. Ok let’s go to your hotel to get some clothes.” You nodded swiftly and sat up and buckled your seatbelt. You pull up to your hotel but don’t know how to enter it. You’re still naked. You ask Riverr for his sweatshirt. He gives you it and you hop out of the car. You run up to the hotel and open the door quietly. You walk in slowly and walk up stairs to your hotel room. You quickly get a duffle bag from the closet and put all your clothes in it. You only owned a few clothes. Then you put only 1 outfit on and put all your pictures and stuff in it. You run out of the room and see your friend in tears. You look at her and say, “I can’t take much more of this Keesha. Im going to go live with my other best friend Riverr.” You run out of the hotel and run to Riverr’s car. You tell him your ready and Riverr drives off. You guys end up at the park again. He gets out of the car and runs towards the swings and tells you to come sit. You actually come sit next to him since your not naked. 12
You sit next to this beautiful boy with the angelic face. You look at every feature. His eyes, nose, mouth, luscious lips, beautiful hair. He looks at your beautiful features. Your eyes, little cute nose, luscious lips, and beautiful messy hair. He chuckles at your hair. You ask, “Whats so funny?” “Your hair. You’re other beautiful features.” He replies. You blush and turn your head because you don’t want him to see you blushing. All of a sudden you feel a hand on your chin making you turn towards him. Of coarse it was Riverr’s. Once you fully faced him, he planted a kiss on your lips that was filled with so much passion. You kissed him back the same way. It turned into a make out session. 13
You make out for like 10 minutes and pull apart breathing hard. You climbed to the top of the slide to the big tower-like part just so you could blush more and think of that kiss. You were waiting for Riverr to follow you. But he didn’t. You look down at the swings and can’t find him. Out of no where Riverr climbs to the top f the slide real fast and shouts, “BOO!!!” You fall down the slide part and hit your head on the cement. You are now unconscious.14
Riverr slides down and picks you up and apologizes. It doesn’t wake you up. He rushes you to the hospital. The doctor comes out after examining you and tells Riverr that you’re unconscious. He asks, “May I go in and see her please.” He nods and walks away. Riverr walks in and walks towards you. He kneels next to you and pulls out a black velvet box. He asks you to marry him and he puts the ring on your finger. Riverr looks around the room and sees a pregnancy test sitting on the counter with a little pink plus sign. He started to cry. He knew that he was the father of this baby. But this baby was dead along with the mother. He sat in a chair next to you and cried on your stomach. You slightly opened your eyes and put your hand on his hand. He raised his head fast and his eyes widened. “Riverr, I was pregnant. I wanted to tell you at the park, but I fell when you scared me. I just wanted to let you know that this HAS to be your baby. I love you.” And you close your eyes just be awoken again by Riverr. “What do you mean WAS pregnant? You can’t die on me. I will do anything for you to stay alive. I would kill myself just for you. But you just can’t leave me.” Tears were streaming down Riverr’s face. You look at him with reassuring eyes. “I already had my baby Riverr.” You whisper.15
‘I will stay alive long enough’ you thought. You close your eyes slowly as the doctor comes in. He tells Riverr that you were in labor and hour ago. “May I see the baby? Is it alive? Is it a boy or girl?” The doctor chuckled then I quickly turned into a frown. You looked at him in curiosity. “Im sorry to tell you this but your baby IS fine but it has one heath issue. Its called birth defect. Because the baby was born early. It’s a beautiful baby boy. And yes you may see the baby anytime you want. Now would be good. If you want to stay the night here with _____ you might want to have the nurse bring in another bed.” He chuckled a little bit and gestured you to come to the nursery. Riverr walked with the doctor to the nursery. He saw tons of baby boys but didn’t know which one was his. The doctor tells him which one. He runs towards the baby boy and picks him up with all the care that he could. “Hey little baby……Taylor. That’s your name. Taylor. Your mom would’ve liked that.” The baby giggles as he is held by his father. Riverr has tears streaming down his face of joy. The doctor rushes in to tell Riverr that you are in a comma. Riverr calls up his friend Austin to tell him that he’s a dad. Austin rushes to the hospital as fast as he could to see his best friend’s baby. Austin gets to the hospital and sees the baby.16
“Congratulations Riverr, you have a beautiful baby. What’s the name?” Austin said with a smile. “Taylor. It’s a handsome name for a handsome boy.” “Taylor?! Aha! That’s a girl’s name! Ahahahaha!” Riverr looked mad at Austin for laughing at his new baby’s name. 7 YEARS LATER: Riverr gets a call from the doctor while at work. Taylor is at School. Hes in 2nd Grade! “Hey Mr. Montgomery. Uhm _____ is out of a comma. You may come pick her up now. You might have to remind her who you are. But other than that she remembers Taylor. She might remember you.” Riverr lets his boss know where he’s going. Of course she lets him go because if her husband was in a comma she would want to be let out to get him when he was out of a comma. Riverr got to the hospital and you jumped at him at the first sight of him. You were so excited to see your love again. Riverr was stunned but he held on tight. “Where’s the baby?” “Baby? Ohhh you mean Taylor? Hes 7 now, _____. He grew. Hes at school.” “Hes that old already? How?” “You were in a comma for so long, _____. Hes older now. He knows about you.” “My son. Taylor? That’s a girl’s name.” “I loved it and I thought you were to.” “I love it Riverr.” You guys kissed and went to school to pick up Taylor early. Taylor met his mom for the very first time. He was so happy to have a mom. You were so happy to have a son. Well, this is the end. THE END!17
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I Read it over nd over again
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I love your Story
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I Dont Freaking Care Bcuz You Know What I Can Put Whatever The Fuck I Want In This Story! Its Mine!! And Plus Yes You Can Be In A Comma For 7 Yrs!! Thats How Long My Grandma Was In One!! Haha Take That Bitch!!
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i liked it butt not the rape part. that just throws the story off same thing with the 7yrs being in acomma a comma never last that long
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It's so good! OMG!!!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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nice flow
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Yes!!!!!!!


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