Im emo and ill tell why I became emo and why am I a cutter... one day about 2 years ago my mom and dad got in a big fight which they were constantly having so I thought it was nothing big well I was wrong I woke up in the morning and my moms stuff were all gone she was gone her car was gone everything her was gone.....well so I became emo from that day forward also I cut because it actually for me relieves the pain from me so I don't feel much pain
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I'm crying now. YOU POOR THING
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Really corrupthoughts well did your mom spend two years to get your dad in jail did your dad go to jail did you not see your dad for 8 and a half months were you about to go up for adoption were your parents cheating on eachother did your house go foreclosure is your dad probably in jail for life answer all those then try to tell me im selfish and it was not easy growing up as the scene girl either so don't go their okay and isn't it selfish that you said don't get me started of what you went through okay and btw I went through all of this when I was 9 because im in 6th grade so im 11
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i am sorry about this, I went through something similar, but at the end of the day,
at the end of the day, i had my dad back!
and things can only get better from here,, I do hope so at least.
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I am not one to discuss my personal family issues on the internet with strangers.. However, I will say that you don't know me at all, and in MY opinion.. what I went through was again, worse than that.. and lasted for about a decade, from five to sixteen.
The fact your in the 6th grade says a lot. I started with "I hope you don't take this the wrong way" but clearly you have... maybe if you didn't take things so personally, and look at it as advice.. you wouldn't feel that way.
Remember man, I am just a fucking stranger in some part of the world.. what the hell does it matter what I think?? If you care to fight this some more, please send me a msg and we can discuss this with just us. However, stay mature with it. I'm not one to argue meaningless crap with a child. (and I am not saying you are)
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Hmmm.. I hope you don't take it the wrong way. but don't you think that is a little selfish? Everyone has issues with their parents, (don't get me started on what I endured), and more people than that, have parents who split up.... Perhaps you need to put yourself in your parents shoes and realize the hardships they were going thru...
On a critical note of the actual writing, you need a lot more commas in place...
I am sorry if I came off as harsh, but I have endured more than most, and I find people who cut only use it as an excuse, because they are not strong enough to handle the curve-balls that life will inevitably throw.. We are only here to learn and grow. -
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Pleas let's all be considerate about this issue when commenting, this was for my contest not for people to sat things that may hurt the writer's feelings. Thank you.
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Sounds like you've had it rough, very traumatizing. Have you considered talking to someone, in hopes of stopping?
Thank you for sharing your story with me.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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