On the school bus, i sat in the back. All the gossip seemed to be directed at me. I don't know why they were whispering. For one, I could still hear them, and two, i knew the conversation was about me. "Shes goth. A total freak." i heard a blond up front say. God, i about walked up there and smashed her face in right then. Nobody, and i mean NOBODY was going to label me. The bus stopped, and a load of stress was relieved from me.2
I walked into Franklin High school for the first time in my life. Already i missed the comfort of Jameson high, my high school for two years. Slowly, i made my way to the office to pick up my schedule. The lady handed it to me right off. I read it aloud: 1st. period-English, 2nd. period-algebra, 3rd.period-biology, 4th. period-world history, 5th.period-P.E./Health ed., 6th. period-art/world language. "Hey, we have the same classes." said a deep voice. I quickly turned around and saw this guy. He was HOT. REALLY HOT! I was stunned for a moment. He had shoulder length black hair, and was wearing a plain black shirt with red skinny jeans. He looked like a bad boy. definitely someone i would go out with. Hey maybe this town wouldnt be so bad after all.......
♦to be continued♦
Author notes
I know there is alot of errors, but i still hope its good. it will be longer next time promise. I also apologize to those of you were insulted in the first part because i said slipknot sucked. i am really sorry, i actually like slipknot, my fav song is wait and bleed 
so, what did you think?
Comments
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Oh my gosh! This is great! Please write more soon :]
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this is goood
cant wait for more
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awesome


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wow i love it
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wow i love it
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awesome
uv this story plz continue who cares about the little mistakes its great
always lana

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good story, dont write about vamps. ,...its wayy overplayed noww


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Don't write about vampires. No book will ever be as good as the twilight series why try. It's a good story though.
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i love these
hay i love these stories!!! Do u think you could write about vampires?beginning: 1, language: 3, plot: 2, ending: 2, dialog: 2, characters: 1.
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i l0ve this story!! Do u write about vampires






