The Girl With the Feather

I walked down the path in stormy weather
I saw a sad girl who held a feather
We didn't know quite what to do
When she saw me-- "Who are you?"1

I bowed my waist and tipped my hat
"It's really not important, that--
But tell me, what do you plan to do
With that feather held so close to you?"2

With hands clamped tight, with guilt in her eyes
She claimed she had no reason to disguise
That she had no idea what she would do--
"Excuse me, may I walk with you?"3

The rain had stopped, for better weather
The girl, she let me hold that feather
I felt like I knew what to do
And at last she smiled-- "Thank you."

Author notes

Wheee I don't know, someone asked me to write a poem so I wrote this in five minutes.

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  • BuBBLeGuM PWNZ
    October 12
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    it's pretty. the rhyme scheme struck me as a little wonky, but otherwise it was awesome.

    • Zoldor
      October 14
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      Well I wrote it in five minutes so FORGIVE ME, Sarah Bubblegum. XDDD


  • Ata Van Halen silver member
    October 7

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    This was a very nice, endearing, flowing piece of poetry. I almost feel better from reading it, as i've been having a rough couple days.

    Thank you for sharing this.

    Keep up the good writing.