Eraser,Pencil,Apples,Pear,Cat,Dog.

Eraser
Big, small
For silly mistakes
Colour rubber, pointy sharp
Writing, drawing, art
Durable, comfortable
Pencil 1


Apples
Round, green
Delicious to taste
Juicy, hard, soft, gooey
An oddly shape
Licking lips
Pear 2

Cat
Nine lives
Jumps up high
Hisses, spits, chases tail
Mans best friend
Very obedient
Dog

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Don’t you just love these Diamante poems, I find then very funny to write at times

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  • Hyperbole
    October 11

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    I know this sounds a little weird, but I love the shape the poem makes, and the inflection it would have if you were to read it

    Silly though it may be, I actually think it's quite a constructive poem. Good job


    • Little Lilly Angel
      October 12
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      lol thanks, yeah i like the shape aswell, i found that for this type of peom it was eier to read
      thanks for the reveiew


  • Minam
    October 10

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    ooh nice. i like the randomness...and how the words relate in the most weirdest ways


  • Elms Apprehended
    October 9

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    Heeeeeh, great!
    Robin says this is great, too.

    ...

    (She is sitting next to me. )

  • StiLL DreamiN
    October 9

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    So this is a certain type of peom writing? Cool!!!!! I like this!!!! (Please don't think me stupid for not knowing this LOL)

    How do you write this kind of poetry???

    • Little Lilly Angel
      October 9
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      I only just new this to be honest lol
      So, you want to know how you do this, and maybe write you own...
      Hmmm...well just becasue you are a good friend i shall tell you, i will message you it becasue it will be easier lol


  • whoudini
    October 6

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    Yes i do and this was very well done and you put this together really well

    and well would like to see more of this. It was actually fun to read and thank for it actually made me smile and thoughts went through my mind of what i could come up with.

    • Little Lilly Angel
      October 7
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      Maybe next time i get bored there will be more lol
      and i am glad i made you think of what you could do
      Have fun if you are creating yours!
      Best of luck
      Lilly


  • AliceNight
    October 6

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    lol yeah i love these
    nice poem by the way^-^

    Alice


  • chasingpavements
    October 6

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    they are really fun to write, and i tip my imaginary hat to you for mentioning the diamante poems "awesomeness" .
    anyways, great little poem, keep up the good work!

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