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This is based on an idea that I had years ago, a collaboration story with my friend Sierra. It was originally an X-men fanfic, though I'm not really sure what I'm going to turn it into now. I do know that there's going to be another character named Hellhound, but I'm not really sure exactly who he's going to be or what his relationship will be with May (AKA Tigress) or anything. This is just what I have so far, so... hope you like it anyway.
What do you think of it so far?
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I love the plot line/storyline, good language but you need to paragraphise it (heehee like my made up word?) Anyways, all round , pretty GREAT!!!

I would most defiantly read this!!!
Keep up the good work, The Schnitzelator


beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 4, characters: 4.
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Lolz, paragraphize. Nice word, even better idea.
It's just that this originally started out as a freewrite thing, so I didn't get to do very much editing. Thanks for the tip, though. I'll have to remember that.
Thanks for the comment! I love your profile pic.
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i'm curious is this a prologue. I guess it's a cool scene, but I would suggest your character doing something tiger like to open chapter one.


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This isn't exactly a prologue... it's more just a freewrite that I did one day, a sort of preview of what's to come. If I ever actually do a prologue for my story, though, it would probably have more foreshadowing in it. But yeah, the tiger thing is a really good idea. You really have a good mind for opening theatrics. Thanks for the comment!
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Thank you i'm glad i was able to help a little
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