“Are you coming?” He asked 1
I smiled and ran into his arms.2
“Hey guys.” Katie said walking towards us. 3
Her hair was blonde, layered, straight, and went down to her shoulders just like mine. What a clone. What was she doing by us anyway. “What?” I snapped4
“... Ow Kitty that hurts you know.” She flipped her hair.5
“Derek everyone misses you come with us to Mayhem tonight.”6
He smiled. “I’m not to sure.” 7
He looked at me. 8
“Whatever.” I said and started walking. 9
“Great.” I heard Katie say10
I pulled out my ipod and started to listen to Apology by Alesana11
“Kitty.” Derek said coming up to me.12
“Hmm?” I asked13
“I’m not going to go.” He said14
“Cool.” 15
“Why are you mad?”16
I turned around.17
“Katie is such a!... Ugh I just hate her okay! She doesn’t know when to stop!” I yelled18
“Kitty, you’re making things seem like a big deal, please chill... I only love you and I wouldn’t so anything to ruin what we have...” 19
I laughed and kissed him. His mouth moved to mine and his tongue was everywhere.20
“I love you.” He said21
“I love you too.”22
It was funny how those words made my insides melt.23
“Lets get something to eat.” He said pulling my hand into the drive way.24
“Were taking the car?” 25
“Yes.” He said26
“I didn’t know you had the keys.” I smiled27
“Yup.” He said28
I sat in the passenger seat and we drove to Pizza Hut. 29
Anthony, Dave, Courtney, Katie and everyone else was sitting there at a table staring at us. I took Derek’s arm “Should we go somewhere else?” He asked30
“Um... if you want.” I said31
“Derk!” Courtney yelled 32
“Sit over here!” 33
We walked towards them. 34
“Hey.” They all said to me.35
“I have to go to the bathroom.” Derek said getting up and leaving the table. Great I was all alone. “So Kitty how have you and Derek been?” 36
“Great...” I said 37
“Awesome. I have to go to the bathroom too.” Katie said getting up and leaving the table as well. “Katie.” Courtney said38
“What spas? I have to pee.” She said behind her.39
Courtney looked at me with a worried look. I looked down. I know Courtney used to not like me but she seems to now. 40
It was quiet for a moment. 41
“Hey Kitty you know Mayhem is tonight right?” Anthony said42
“Sure.” I replied43
“You and Derek should come.” 44
I smiled. “Derek can go if he wants... if that’s what you’re asking...” I said45
It was quiet again. Derek and Katie came out together. Derek was behind Katie walking. She limped and her hair was messed up. Derek’s was just a little. Courtney looked at me again. 46
Did they? But they couldn’t of have! Derek said he loves me. 47
Just act casual soon we’ll go and you’ll find out I told myself. 48
Finally we went home. I quickly got out of the car and ran into Eddy’s room. She wasn’t home so I just lied on her bed and listened to Not good enough for Truth in Cliche by Escape the Fate. I didn’t want to cry again especially just what I had seen. 49
Derek knocked on the door and came in. 50
“What’s wrong Kitty?” He said51
“... God you’re always mad!” He yelled52
I sat up. “Excuse me! I am not always mad! But right now I am pissed! How could you!” I stood and walked out of the room. I shoved my ipod in my jacket pocket and walked down the stairs. “Oh come on Katie! Tell me!” I tripped on the last step. 53
“Katie? My name is not Katie you asshole!” I yelled getting back up and reaching for the door. He pulled me away and gently pushed me to the wall. “Please tell me.” He said54
Tears were already streaming down my face. 55
“Katrina.” He said touching my cheek. I swatted his hand away.56
“I saw you come out of the bathroom with Katie! She was limping and yours and her hair was messed up! God I can’t believe you would do that to me!” I yelled57
“I hate you!” I added58
He kissed me and he wouldn’t let me pull away, I kissed him back more passionately. Why was I! Kitty You’re so stupid stop kissing him! 59
“I love you so much.” I said crying60
“I love you too.” He said61
Author notes
Derek has turned into a total douche.
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Haha I hope umm the first guy comes back...... The seemed to be thebest for her
Even though he broke up with her and creped in her room so random night
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Aghhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bathroom sex!!!!!
I so feel sorry for kitty, how the hell can she still love him, Ohh it would be amazing if kitty shot katie
Ok, so my vote...
Katie to die...
And Kitty and derek to live happily ever after,
Like they allways shoul of done
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I hate Kaite soooooo much she needs to build a bridge and get over it. I can't believe derek called kat kaite I would have punched him and leave.
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what the hell. did they do it in the bathroom? katie and derek i mean. well i'll be damned i actually thought he was going to be good. dick! awsome story though. i love kittie.


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Very Gooooood!
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OMG!!!! I've been following this story forthepast couple days, I reallythink guys are just like naturally evil. xP. They cant help it though! I hope kitty gets away from him..What if he turns outto be abusive like her dad?? Maybe she should go lezbo lmao. KEEEP WRITTING PLEASE!!!! =]]
Chelsey

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Lmfao. You're funny!
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Please don't make him go with Katie. She's such a bitch. He should choose Kitty. She's way better. And continue. Write the next part fast.
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wow....

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